criminal minds fanfic

[homicidal69]

Ok, this is my first CM fanfiction,  so if people could tell me what they think, or tell me about any errors before i post it in a community that would be great.

"Keep your private life private" I think that’s the first thing I ever learnt.  Don’t let people see the real you.  For years I lived like that, I didn’t tell anyone much about who I was,

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[fridays_muse]

Okay this is how much I actually take notice of titles. Took me until now to figure out what CM means even though you've stated it. God i'm a dill, I ought to read rather than scan things. Afraid I can't comment on the 'story'.
Love you.