FIC: His Name in Vein

[homo_pink]

His Name in Vein - j2 au | NC-17 | 8k
Jensen is an Emergency Room nurse working the night shift and Jared's the patient with a lot of emergencies.
Warning: OC wife, infidelity, jealousy, poorly handled situations
For anon, who asked for J2 AU with infidelity, they cheat on spouse not each other. I hope this is something close to what you were

Comments

[big_heart_june]

HI YOU ♥ Wow you darling. omgjustwowwowwow. how amazing was this? *holds out heart* ugh i'm soooooooo stupidly in love with everything here...giant HUGE crazy-smart baby Jared and his big wet fucking Bambi eyes, the band-aids (MY HEART) your Jensen and Gen bits, JENSEN AS AN ER NURSE! and he smokes too *sigh* Jared's soft wandering fingers (omg jensen's wrist...) dazedly staring, eyes blurry stupid and hot and scribbled pickup lines, nose brushing and nuzzling, pink princess balloons and sugary smiles....I could just go on forever..
I love you for ridiculous lines like these:
"You're a fucking asshole," Jared tells him later, stroking through the sweaty mess of Jensen's matted sex hair

[homo_pink]

you are absolutely the best. and so very inspirational. i haven't replied yet but the photos you left in the prompt post worked really well for me. i'd written in the smoking bit just because i could see it, in my head, and thought it fit well with the character but i wasn't absolutely sure of it. but then your photos popped up and i decided yes, absolutely, i had to leave it in lol. especially that first one. the bloody fingers. oh jesus. oh jensen. i just love the thought of that being him. in my mind, it's him. sold.

and i'm so happy all of the other bits worked for you too. thanks so very very much for pointing things out. it's a joy to read your feedback, it truly is. you're so kind and so passionate and i just love you for that. you just don't know. oh, and another thing, thank you for your rec and sending people over this way ♥

[big_heart_june]

♥ omg i am thrilled they work! so very very very! and esp so for smoking Jensen and bloody Jensen. be still my heart ♥

my passion is all on you, you lovely thing you. i'm so thankful ♥

[thestarkat]

I loved the way this story grew piece by piece, detailing their meetings and growing attraction. I wasn't sure if this was going to have a happy ending or not, but I'm very glad it did. Very nice!

[homo_pink]

so happy you enjoyed. thanks so much for stopping by to read and letting me know ♥

[tipsy_kitty]

So beautifully written. I loved how with a few small details you were able to turn Jared's wife into an actual character that I cared for. Although of course I loved that Jared and Jensen were together in the end :)

[homo_pink]

so very much a relief to hear that she didn't come across as too one dimensional, or as a prop. thanks for the kind words ♥ ♥

[meus_venator]

My heart hurt the entire time I read this, from each manic puff of Jensen's cigarette to the sterile covers being torn off the spiderman bandage I found it hard to breathe. I kept waiting for Jensen's heartbreak, for Jared to disappoint him in some gigantic, no takebacksies for ever and ever way.

But you didn't, but I didn't know that. And it's only when Jensen is having his cake and eating it too that I can let out one long relived sigh.
Beautifully done. ♥

[homo_pink]

oh what lovely feedback. so thrilled you liked. i couldn't give these two an unhappy ending, i just couldn't. perhaps it would have been better (more realistic, perhaps?) if i had, but i couldn't. and i'm happy to hear the ending worked! ♥ ♥

[firesign10]

So sweet and funny, but they had some real stuff to work through too.. Loved this!

[homo_pink]

i'm so glad you did. thanks so much for reading and for letting me know ♥