021 - fic: if you love me, won't you let me know - arthur/morgana

[honestlygreen]

if you love me, won't you let me know. a merlin fic, g. 928 words.
morgana is no stranger to nightmares. in fact, she's all too familiar with them. almost as well as the loneliness of childhood. but relief might just come in the form of arthur pendragon.

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[bellaleea2]

That is really good. i really look up to people like you. i seriously find it hard to write, and when i read stuff like that, i think, oh my god. why can't i just peice words together like that?

truely brilliant, hope you write more ;P

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[honestlygreen]

Aww, thankyou so much! Really glad you liked it.

The best advice I can give about writing is just... practice. Read others' works, and practice as much as you can. (:

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[bellaleea2]

thnx for the tips. will practice. trying to write a fan fiction at the moment c[;

[archaeologist_d]

Arthur did Morgana a favor in telling Uther about the nightmares. At least sometimes she got some sleep, poor thing. The ending was sweet. I liked how Arthur was trying so hard to help her. Good job with this.

[honestlygreen]

Thanks (:

[insideminds]

That was so lovely! The way you've set out Morgana and Arthur's relationship over time and they ways that he reacts to her dreams are all fantastic :)

[honestlygreen]

Yay, thankyou! I'm glad you liked it :D

[yourmanuscript]

Oh, ouch. This was so pretty, but just broke my heart. And your imagery is absolutely A+, my goodness! MOAR. WRITE MOAR, PLZ.

[honestlygreen]

(: Thanks, bb. Glad you liked it!

[iladora]

aww. this one is more cheerful :) <3 (but still sad. *sigh*)

She wakes, gasping, shaking, shivering, trying to assure herself that the wall of her chambers is reality, not the monsters pent up inside her head. Sometimes, she can't even tell the difference.
very nice :)

[honestlygreen]

I'm an angst whore, didn't you know? :P

Heehee, thanks bb.