Unusual You, KyuWook, NC-17

Jun 01, 2009 20:38

Written for an sj_meme prompt.

Top: Kyuhyun
Bottom: Ryeowook
Prompt/kink: Making fun of Ryeowook's weight/weight loss/how thin he is now.
Anything else: Non-con, most likely, but anything is okay.

WARNING: This is dark. It involves partial rape, self hate, eating disorders, jealousy etc etc.

Please don't do this. )

*double shot, rating: nc-17, *meme, genre: smut, group: super junior, pairing: kyuhyun/ryeowook

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blue_starzz33 June 2 2009, 02:36:04 UTC
AHH!
NO BAD KYUHYUN!!!!!!!

omo!
wookie!
dont be like that!!!!

thiss was very good...bt it was soooooo sad!
;__;

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honeyandclovers June 2 2009, 02:49:47 UTC
I know ;o;

When i saw the prompt on sj_meme I was interested in it, but it was harder to write then I thought it would be. It was weird to write an ending like that, but it's angsty, so I had too lol.

When I had finished, I wanted to do a sequel just so I could change how badly things were left off :P

Thank you for commenting! ♥

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thundersquall June 2 2009, 02:55:19 UTC
I... oh my God. I am... quite speechless.

Ok wait. Let me just say something. First, I love Sungmin. And I ship KyuMin. And I love Ryeowook, and I also ship YeWook.

So why do I love this fic of yours so much when it literally means Kyu is cheating on Sungmin and Wook is (sorta) cheating on Yesung and Ryeowook is being abused to taunted and raped?

I have no idea why I'm loving this story so damned much.

I think I'm the fucked up one.

*goes back to speechlessness*

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honeyandclovers June 2 2009, 03:13:54 UTC
I ship both of those pairings too, so i had to put it in there somewhere haha.

I have no idea why you love it, but I'm really glad you do. I was worried no one would like a fic that was so dark and didn't have any... good points to it, you know?

Thank you for commenting! :3

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zhenli June 2 2009, 03:01:38 UTC
... ='(. You have an AMAZING way with words... Really. The images you created were-- although sad and scary, very real.

Seriously, this is a piece of art! =) Thank you for sharing, I'm still a little shocked... (in a good way)

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honeyandclovers June 2 2009, 03:19:15 UTC
Are you serious?

Thank you so so much, really. I was so worried about capturing everything right, because it's a deep topic. I didn't want the words to hold down the emotions that were involved.

I'm glad that you thought there was shock value to it, its one of the reason i picked the prompt in the first place ♥

You're comment made me smile like an idiot lol.

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zhenli June 2 2009, 03:26:22 UTC
It is a deep topic, and you captured it beautifully! I typically don't like how people write serious topics because they do them in a 'movie' like way, but this was scary realistic, in my mind.

Seriously, again, brilliant! =)

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honeyandclovers June 2 2009, 03:43:00 UTC
I know a lot of the time I don't read serious fic's because things tend to get lost by using too much explanations, verbs etc. even when the plot seems good. Which way is a movie like way?

I still can't believe you think its realistic and well written, lol, this is one of my first fics in the genre, i had been so worried about it, god ♥

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toma_love June 2 2009, 03:45:05 UTC
you know what's funny?

when suju started up promoting sorry sorry sungmin said that he began fasting again for the new image concept.

so sungmin fasts a lot and he has a general frame with some 'baby fat'

aish . poor wookie

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honeyandclovers June 2 2009, 04:15:52 UTC
I agree about Sungmin, I had looked up the weight for super junior and it said that he had one of the lowest. But in my opinion the thinnest is Ryeowook and Eeteuk.

I wanted to use someone that would make Ryeowook jealous, not only because of the way he looked but because of his closeness to Kyuhyun, to justify his mixed feelings towards him I guess. I ship Kyumin and it seemed to work out alright so i used him ;D

Thanks for commenting~

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shaniskara June 2 2009, 04:13:43 UTC
i never into kyumin or yewook...
i really love kyuwook... but this... THIS IS SOOO GREAT!!!
i love the way you write it... it really sounds real...

poor wookie though...

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honeyandclovers June 2 2009, 04:27:10 UTC
Kyumin is my otp, but i kind of find it boring to write because i like drama.

I never thought i would see the day when I would pair Ryeowook and Kyuhyun together, but i really liked the way they worked out together. So I'll probably write it again.

Thank you so much ♥
I had been skeptical but I'm glad it seemed to have worked out.

lol, Ryeowook's character in this is one of the most fucked up I've written to date.

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shaniskara June 2 2009, 04:59:42 UTC
nyahahaha xDDD then i'll be waiting for your next kyuwook then ;)
*may be a sequel? when kyu realized his feeling to wookie :p*

yeah... wookie so fucked up here...
but why i still love him?? >.<

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honeyandclovers June 2 2009, 05:10:18 UTC
There just might be haha, I purposefully wrote Ryeowook giving Kyuhyun a hickey in order to have something to go off of if I decided to write a sequel lol.

As much as this is an ending, I wouldn't mind using these characters again at all lol.

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