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gabi_fics September 6 2012, 20:39:15 UTC
This is turning into an epic and I'm loving every minute of it. I can totally sympathise with Casey. Zeke's just built right in all the right places.

Becca's gonna be crushed.

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aliensouldream September 6 2012, 22:10:05 UTC
Amazing, gorgeous - ambrosia for the brain!

I just don't get that Zeke. He is an Enigma. It must be torturing Casey to know what it is he wants. Sheer companionship? By-stealth seduction? It's hard to tell at this stage. He's sly in questioning, but the strange withdrawals and sudden rages don't seem like boyfriend-positioning behaviour. He seems to view Casey as a pure little boy who should be saved from the chicks and the hurts of social life but is he letting his own neuroses run wild? I'm confused, and loving it!

Casey is NOT confused, knowing well what he wants in this luscious young man, but he is frustrated. And that HOT. :-)

Zeke held the deed to every fantasy, want and pore-

Zeke, the deed! Claim the deed!

but all outward, acceptable places people could see of him showed nothing but boy, boy, little, little boy... That's the good part! Teen heaven and don't you ever change, Casey boy, we love you xxx ( ... )

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wiccabex September 6 2012, 23:09:31 UTC
awwwwwwwwww! Poor Zeke, so alone and traumatised. You have such a gift for characterisation. I want to hug them both so much.
I'm assuming the ambrosia is not the ambrosia devon custard we have over here but something else? The way you described it doesn't fit with what we have but I've never heard of it before??

Can I just say (and please don't be offended) that you used the wrong 'illicit'. What you wanted was 'elicit'. It may be a dictionary fault on your pc- mine has tried to tell me all sorts in the past, usually utterly insane.

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honeyandvinegar September 6 2012, 23:18:01 UTC
Haha, not offended! I ALWAYS screw up which one's which. LOL! THANK you for that, lol. Believe me, I wanna know when I mess up. :D

Ambrosia salad here is a mix of fruit (usually fruit cocktail), marshmallows, coconut, whipped cream... it's not MY big fave, but it felt fitting for Zeke, for whatevz reason. I suppose it's cos' he's a squishy, delicious, fluffy-hearted boy. :D:D:D:D

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wiccabex September 7 2012, 08:24:33 UTC
that sounds very... sugary. I agree it's perfect for Zeke, because he is a sweetie underneath it all. I think I'll stick to my low fat custard though (oddly enough I usually have it with fruit!)

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lijahlover September 7 2012, 02:13:11 UTC
I have just read all three parts and love the feel of this story.

It is very fast paced to I enjoy the way they interact together.

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addie71 September 7 2012, 02:36:10 UTC
Whoa, what a roller coaster ride this part turned out to be. I really thought for a minute that Zeke was going to kick Casey out of the car.

I loved Zeke letting his guard down and letting Casey in. Lovely fic, me dear.

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