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May 25, 2013 15:42

Some Torrin!fic, idea that'd popped up in my head.

Title: Just Like You: Pink
Pairing: C/Z
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): het, some angst
Disclaimer: Don't own!
Synopsis: Zeke has a past, one that clashes with the present.

I guess the question is... does it matter? )

torrin!fic

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moit May 25 2013, 21:31:51 UTC
You know I can never pass up a Tory!Fic. This was adorable! And angsty! And boobies! (Tell me the French-styles boobies were for me!)

I couldn't see Zeke cheating, with a chick OR a dude. I was waiting for them to get to the part where they just needed some smexing, but I suppose they did. Lovely, babes. :) I has a happy.

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honeyandvinegar May 26 2013, 18:25:00 UTC
Us discussing them helped, yes! But it'd been Pan's giving the factoid that stuck me on the description. Still, BEWBIES! :D

In this uni, no, Zeke can't cheat. He's a lovable fluff monster with juuust enough of an edge to influence his own son into being gritty and gorgeous. :D Love that you love, babyboo!

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addie71 May 26 2013, 00:19:28 UTC
This is so real. Zeke's curiosity is not unusual, he and Casey were so young when they got together and neither of them really had much time to grow into their adult selves before they married. Thankfully, Zeke's love for Casey was strong enough to get him through this.

Love the ending. :D

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honeyandvinegar May 26 2013, 18:27:05 UTC
Pan and I discussed this little piece for a few days, and as always, he really gives such great insight into how a mentality like this *works*. So his advice, thoughts and knowledge is always sprinkled around most of my fic. :D I'm glad you see it!

And as I told Monz about, yis, in this AU of mine? NOBODY COMPARES TO CASEY FOR ZEKE, and vicey-versey!! *HUG*

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verangel May 26 2013, 14:36:00 UTC
I loved this. I had so many scenerios popping into my head. I thought maybe even Mindy was a well disguised Casey. I loved where this went at the end and of course wanted more of that!! Best line was zeke saying Casey was gorgeous to mindy. Loved this so much. Hugs you tons and love. Xoxo v

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honeyandvinegar May 26 2013, 18:29:17 UTC
*hugs billions and billions back*! Thank you, my peach. I know, I KNOW, I tease you so... but hey, maybe your imagination completes the lovemakingz better than what I'd come up with!! I like thinking of it that way sometimes; that my sexy-cliffies are sometimes Just Right, letting the readership take over to think on what happens next. ;)

Love you so! And MISS you, we have to DISKUSSSS possible meet-ups over the summer in Upstate NY!! You still wiff me on that? It's been too damned long...

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nachtschade May 30 2013, 08:14:35 UTC
So many little twists and turns in this story, constantly wondering where this was finally going to lead. To something good! :D
Thanks for writing Honey!

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layne67 May 30 2013, 09:17:29 UTC
I'm glad that Zeke didn't give in to his urges and cheat on Casey.

This is sooo good, love it much!

ps Hopefully we'll see more of pink girl, I like her too :)

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