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[honeyandvinegar]

I don't CARE if it's quiet 'round here don't CARE that I can't write anything other than my C/Z-Daddies!AU MUST POST MORE FUQQIN TORRIN!FIC!!! :D

Title: Just Like You: Checkmate
Pairing: C/Z
Rating: Light R (again, ?)
Disclaimer: Don't own!
Synopsis: Casey pays his past a visit back in Herrington.

Comments

[moit]

Dude I can't believe Casey had the balls to call Stokely 'the egg doner.' LMAO!!! I know he thinks more highly of her than that, but that shit was hilarious!

I also lovelove awkward tween Torrin. (Seriously, is there any Tory I DON'T love??) I'd like more of the awkward teenage-ness, please. Maybe like Zeke catches him jerking off or something? LMAO Ooooh I'm a freak. (And, NO, I was NOT implying the 'cest. For once.)

Keep em coming, babe! I'll keep coming back. IT WORKS IF YOU WORK IT, TOM!

[addie71]

I love a rehabilitated Gabe. Nothing can change the way he treated Casey in High School, but I love what he's done to try to make up for it. Great story, love.

Echoes Moit: Keep 'em coming! I love this AU. :DDDDD

[verangel]

This was another great moment in torrin verse. It had such a wonderful and logical turn in showing Gabe growing into a decent human being and mending himself and Casey. It was definitely telling when Gabe noticed the flinch from Casey. It showed how truly observant he was and how truthful. It isn't easy to be sorry,truly sorry, but Gabe showed just how deep his shame was and how his life was altered in the process. Hugs you and much love. Xoxo

[layne67]

I'm glad to see that Gabe turns out good in the end, and that he wants to make it right with Casey. Will there be a reunion in this verse? I'd love to see Delilah again, and I'd love them to meet Coach again :)

[aliensouldream]

He only knew that bad history was bending up to touch the present, coalescing and clear.

18 years wouldn't be too soon for me to say 'Oh really? Screw you, you sad sack of quivering crap, and no I DON'T forgive you a single goddamn thing, so suck on that to your therapist, you snivelling broken dick!' But that's because I'm not as forgiving a person as you, at least in fantasy.

That doesn't mean I can't appreciate the fic, and the awesomeness of Casey realising how utterly superior he always was to this asshole sorry, of true mature remorse and humility and Casey's generosity in forgiveness and setting a great example to the little 'uns. I like the perception of Casey's thoughts and the moment when it almost comes undone, before it doesn't, and Casey's peace of mind and the laying of demons. I'm with Zeke though and would have made Gabe grovel, for fun :-)