feeding

[honeylocustmoth]

we eat our own bread
but stir someone else's soup -
hearts in our mouths
and ears to the door.

Comments

feeding

[anonymous]

very cool. lots of generative ambiguity in each line and in the accumulation.
. . . says rp

Re: feeding

[honeylocustmoth]

Actually, I need to put quotes around the two first lines. They were a part of my Saturday night lecture and not actually mine. I liked making a poem out of them though, and am glad something about it seems to work.