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geekmama August 19 2010, 08:24:25 UTC
Sounds just like Barbossa, and it's true that we never learn exactly how much time passes between the attack on Port Royal and the Pearl's arrival at Isla de Muerta.

Barbossa licks his lips with a dry tongue.

Wonderfully horrible.

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honorat August 21 2010, 02:22:32 UTC
You're almost always my first commenter! Thank you so much. I know Gibbs says the mutiny happened 3 days out from Tortuga, and Tortuga is at least 3 days by sail out from Jamaica, so I figure the trip had to be over a week.

Wonderfully horrible.
I'm glad you liked the effect. I thought that adjective "dry" would emphasize how empty that feast would be for him, and I hoped by putting that line between the description of the food and of Elizabeth that it would hint that she might be on the menu for dessert. :P

Barbossa the complete villain of CotBP is always such fun to write.

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evilmissbecky August 19 2010, 10:29:25 UTC
Love that last line!

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honorat August 21 2010, 02:23:53 UTC
Thank you! It would be a sad thing if that first meal after they regained sensation went pear-shaped because the Cook had forgotten his craft.

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sharklady35 August 21 2010, 03:42:29 UTC
> ...pear-shaped... <

Do you happen to know the origin of that expression?

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honorat August 21 2010, 04:22:38 UTC
Alas, no. I don't know. My source is DMC and the inimitable Gibbs.

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sharklady35 August 19 2010, 14:32:29 UTC
I'd always assumed that the Pearl's crew stole the food during their raid on Port Royal, on the assumption they'd soon acquire the final coin & break their curse. And wouldn't they be wanting to slake their appetites then!

Fine little scene-filler drabble!

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honorat August 21 2010, 02:25:45 UTC
Thank you for your comments. Yes, there are a number of different ways that food could have arrived on board the ship. What is true in all cases is that desire to slake their appetites as you say. Elizabeth was lucky her blood didn't work!

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sharklady35 August 21 2010, 03:40:53 UTC
> Elizabeth was lucky her blood didn't work! <

Aye, and luckier still that William and Jack had come after her. If they hadn't shown up when they did, the pirates might've killed her in that cave from sheer frustration.

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honorat August 21 2010, 04:23:56 UTC
Very true. They did seem to be a bit over hasty to burn their bridges.

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aletheiafelinea August 19 2010, 18:00:06 UTC
I love when a fic fills places in the plot.
Perfect last line. Heh, would be horrible, to lift the curse and then to find out the Cook's skill got rusty.

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honorat August 21 2010, 02:26:58 UTC
It's lovely to hear from you. Thank you so much. Plot-hole filling is a favourite pastime for me.

Heh, would be horrible, to lift the curse and then to find out the Cook's skill got rusty.
This made me laugh.

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captaintish August 20 2010, 03:32:53 UTC
Ooh, so good to see you writing again!

Oh, and your disclaimers are as awesome as ever!

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honorat August 21 2010, 02:27:41 UTC
It's grand to hear from you again, too! I'm glad you're enjoying the disclaimers. They do amuse my little mind.

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captaintish August 21 2010, 04:12:41 UTC
How is your little one? And how old now?

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honorat August 21 2010, 04:19:18 UTC
He's 3 1/2 now--just starting to walk on his own without holding on to things. He's learning some sign language. We're starting a new medication that we hope will be better at controlling his seizures. And he starts a special school this fall! We love our sweet little happy boy. If you want to see pictures and are a facebook person, you could send me a friend request--I'm on there as Honorat Selonnet.

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