Drabble...thing.

Jan 18, 2006 22:10

Just a quick snippet, because I've really, really been neglecting this pairing, and I also like the idea of a "What can else we make Tasuki do?" series. ^__^ For the wing_well community.

Written quickly and unbeta'd, because I had the idea, and none of my usual betas are online.

Here it is )

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animus_wyrmis January 19 2006, 04:50:36 UTC
(Okay, I don't know the characters.) I like it...you might be able to cut it down to a double-drabble if you try hard. It's cute, though, but you might want to end on a stronger note -- you use such good dialogue in the beginning..

Now, who are these people?

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honorbound January 19 2006, 04:56:31 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. I probably could cut it down to double-drabble length, but I really hate cutting things from stories. It takes me forever. ::sigh:: And I know what you mean about the ending, but this fits, and I'm a little worried that if I messed with it, the story would get even longer before I got it right.

Mostly I'm just lazy...^__^

The characters are from Fushigi Yuugi, the first anime series I ever watched. I still really like it, but the fandom isn't especially active, so I don't spend as much time with it as I'd like.

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fancieflights January 19 2006, 05:18:02 UTC
Ha! Chichiri got Tasuki to drink milk!!! That might the highest accomplishment one could achieve. Go Chichiri!

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honorbound January 19 2006, 14:28:30 UTC
Well, I was just trying to think of something Tasuki hated....

Thank you for reading!

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fancieflights January 19 2006, 14:32:26 UTC
And he despises milk like nothing else *giggles*
My pleasure! Excellent job ^_^

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moonraven_croft January 19 2006, 22:31:30 UTC

Of course we still want it!!! It really cute! *snuggles Tasuki* Poor thing...

This only goes to prove that Chichiri can get Tasuki to do anything... Hey, he got you to write, too!

Thank you for joining the fun, sweetie!!!

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honorbound January 19 2006, 22:59:34 UTC
Yay! I'm glad you liked it. ^__^

Hey, he did get me to write, didn't he...?

Thank you for reading!

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she_who_arises January 20 2006, 02:16:53 UTC
Yay! You're right... you haven't written Tas/Chi in ages. You write wonderful fluff that makes me happy :)

I do agree w. Emmy though... I think you need to strengthen and condense it for it to reach its full potential.

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honorbound January 20 2006, 19:30:55 UTC
::sigh:: I didn't write it to be great art, I wrote it because I needed a break from the fence fic, which hates me, and because the prompt sounded like fun. And, naturally, because I've been neglecting the fandom horribly.

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she_who_arises January 21 2006, 01:50:39 UTC
then it hath fulfilled its duty quite admirably, my lady

:D

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honorbound January 21 2006, 03:17:03 UTC
Glad to hear it. ^__^

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archon_mentha January 20 2006, 19:36:42 UTC
*cheers* Perfect! *g* I would LOVE to see Taasuki's expression when he realizes what he's been doing! *dissolves into giggles*

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honorbound January 20 2006, 19:55:26 UTC
::laughs:: Something between embarrassed and enraged, I'd imagine...

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

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