a summer themed Dean-focused h/c comment meme (themed comment meme #4)

[hoodietime]

HAPPY SUMMER!!!

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[honeylocusttree]

So after all the massive massive stress of the last few years, Dean's gotten in the habit of assuming every physical ailment he has--stomach issues, panic attacks, hair falling out, chronic aches and pains, weight loss, whatever--is stress related. Typically, they are. He tends to ignore them because as annoying as they are, they aren't actually *harmful*, at least in his definition of the word

[kalliel]

Holy-- @____@ D; DO WANT.

[honeylocusttree]

I feel like a lot of my prompts are too weird to ever get filled, but this one could maybe appeal to somebody. It's pretty developed. *crosses fingers*

Plus, it's basically two types of hurt!Dean in one! Woo!

[maypoles]

This is just my type of prompt. /loves to bits

[honeylocusttree]

This one I'd enjoy a lot. :D

Fill part one

[honeylocusttree]

Alright, this is my first time doing this. Here’s hoping I didn’t cock it up too badly. Or write a horrifically boring story. Hope it’s okay!The thing is, it’s been a long time since Dean woke up feeling good

Re: Fill part two

[honeylocusttree]

“Dude, you realize it’s August

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[honeylocusttree]

They were supposed to head out after breakfast, but Dean fell back asleep while Sam was in the shower and woke up feeling like he was covered in lead weights. He recalls, vaguely, feeling this sick once before, probably when he was eleven or so, and lying in bed, feeling his father’s scorn and Sam’s building annoyance. “Get up, Dean,” he’d said, again and again, but Dean didn’t, just rolled over and dropped back into a restless, snivelly sleep, and he’s not entirely sure that was the first night Dad smacked Sammy, but it might have been. In any case he eventually began to resent feeling like he was missing too much, not to mention shrink all the more under Dad’s disapproval, and after a day or so he dragged himself out of bed and got back to the business of being Dean Winchester-not a position that allowed for much bed rest

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[honeylocusttree]

He doesn’t remember getting into the room, or into bed, but he must have, because he’s awoken by his own hacking coughing. His whole body is becoming involved, jerking and bucking as he coughs and coughs and

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[honeylocusttree]

He doesn’t know what he dreamt, but he wakes up like he’s been electrocuted, jerking up so fast he smacks his head on the car’s ceiling before he sinks low in his seat, shaking and breathing shallow, some echo of blood and someone screaming rattling in his head. God, everything hurts, not sharply or urgently but endlessly, his body one persistent, thudding ache

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[honeylocusttree]

Sam pulls him across another parking lot and into another unfamiliar room. He’s so dizzy he feels like he just got off a fairground ride. He loved those, as a kid, but Sammy hated them. If there was anything in his stomach, he thinks he’d probably puke right now.

He spots a bed and lurches for it, but someone holds him back and he doesn’t like that, let me go let me go, he tries to struggle and probably only flails. Someone is talking right into his ear, Dean, Dean, it’s me, Dean, relax, and then he’s being pulled into the bathroom and before he knows what’s going on he’s been deposited on the toilet while Sammy fills the tub with water. He’s talking, Sam is, but Dean can’t hold onto the words.

Then Sam is pulling his clothes from him, and he considers a witty comment but can’t produce one and anyways it’s so cold, he’s shivering and coughing and Sam is guiding him and talking to him, pushing him into the tub and Jesus it’s cold, it’s so cold it actually feels like it’s going to burn him, like his skin will steam like a demon

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[kalliel]

Haven't read it yet, but omg. Just wanted to let you know, anon, that this is one of the prompts that I really really REALLY wanted to see filled! I am so excited!! :D

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[maypoles]

What kalliel said. I'm saving this for later, but I couldn't help but peek at the first little bit of it and I LOVE IT ALREADY. <333

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[kalliel]

Yes. Yeeeeeesssssssssss! I will try for something a little more articulate but I'm not sure if I'll manage. I adored every word of this--Dean's internalized Sam, and his interpretations (and revisions) of the real one. The way the narrative tracks Dean's conscious involvement with the rest of the scene vs. his own fevered trains of thought, especially towards the end: Someone is pleading with him to get up. This might be a trick, or a dream. He doesn’t move. *___* <33 The language and all the tiny little micro-descriptions are wondrous, as well. If I had to choose, my favorite parts of this are Dean's assessments of himself. They're painful, but not maudlin, overdone--and their frankness just hurts all the more. There's so much going on even in the short space of this one fic, I just want to read it over and over again. Excellent work! I hope to see you with us many more times in the future, anon. So pleased to see you at the comm! :DD

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[sparrow_lately]

Well, shit, this is so sweet I'm not even going to be anon. :P

Thank you thank you! I've never written Supernatural fic before--I only even started watching it this June at the insistence of a friend--so I'm glad I didn't make a complete mess of it. I love Dean to pieces so it makes sense I ended up here. ^^

Thank you so much for your kind feedback!

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[kalliel]

<3333333 Your true identity!! Hello! Just wanted to say again that we're so glad to see you at the comment!meme--IF YOU LOVE DEAN TO PIECES THIS IS THE RIGHT PLACE TO BE. Excuse me while we kidnap you now. XD

Thank you for your lovely fill~