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Fic: The Change in the Constant - (4/7 Complete)

Nov 30, 2009 23:16

Title: The Change in the Constant
Author: Hoodie622
Pairing: B/B
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Set in Season 4 - post Bone that Blew but before Mayhem. There are no specific spoilers here, but for me this is where it fits from a character development POV ( Read more... )

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hoodie622 December 1 2009, 22:32:27 UTC

Wow! 4 chapters in one go! Thanks so much for taking the time to read. I'm so glad to hear you like the characterizations. Being in first person made those really rough. I had to characterize Brennan through her own eyes, and I could only write about Booth what she sees in him.

Again, thank you so much for taking the time to comment.

manual84 December 1 2009, 19:05:52 UTC

This is AMAZING. Seriously. I am so excited to see where this goes. You've really nailed their characters and written their relationship progress in a very true-to-form style. I love it!

hoodie622 December 1 2009, 22:33:20 UTC

Do glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for taking the time to leave me a comment.

sb158 December 1 2009, 21:15:31 UTC

OK, got it now. This chapter clarified things immensely. And I like the way things are progressing. Glad she finally gets what's going on, and taking the time to make sure.

hoodie622 December 1 2009, 22:34:22 UTC

I'm glad you like it and that I've managed to write clearly. :)

Thanks for taking the time to comment.

naeara_k December 4 2009, 00:42:33 UTC

Nawwwww...

"Then it dawned on me, I had said we'll drop off Parker, implying that the dropping off would be happening together...which implied that we'd be leaving to drop him off together...which implied that we'd be leaving from here...which implied that I wasn't planning to leave."

I loved that.
And everyone is right, the characterization of Booth is spot on. *sitting waiting patiently for the next chapter*

hoodie622 December 4 2009, 03:20:20 UTC

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. It means a lot when people let you know what they like.

I'm glad that you like Booth here. It is Booth entirely filtered through Brennan and I've played with it for far too many hours. So glad it feels right for you and others.

More coming soon. Look for it on the weekend.

Thanks again.