fic: you don't know me [white collar, pg-13, run_the_con]

Oct 25, 2013 08:15

Title: you don't know me
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: White Collar
Pairing: Neal/Elizabeth/Peter
Notes: Written for run_the_con, the prompt "You don't know me." I'm really clever at titles...
Thanks: mockorange was my cheerleader when I got held at work for three hours longer than planned and realized I had about an hour to write this. She's awesome. And huge thanks to embroiderama for ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, fandom: white collar, fic

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sheenianni October 25 2013, 15:26:26 UTC
"I like you too,” Peter said. Neal felt like his heart actually skipped a beat, his whole being going on hold for a second as it adjusted to this new truth. “I just gave up hope when Moz's deadline in the betting pool passed."

:D :D :D

You killed me. I mean, the whole story is lovely and touching and everything, but that line is just so funny :D

(Calming down now.)

Seriously, this is gorgeous. I really haven't been in the mood for the OT3 lately, but this was so light-hearted yet vulnerable, so lovely; a wee bit funny and a bit painful, but simple and raw and honest and beautiful.

I love that you included Mozzie, June and Diana, even if only indirectly.

Love it.

(PS: And now I need a retrospective story with June/Byron/Ford.)

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hoosierbitch November 2 2013, 21:23:05 UTC
You are so sweet! Thank you so much! I'm glad this re-ignited some OT3 love. :-)

And June/Byron/Ford is totally canon. Yup. Lalala...

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angelita26 October 25 2013, 16:10:40 UTC
Awwww, how lovely! TBH, I feel like Neal sometimes - like I'm learning things about myself for the first time. This really made sense to me, and I adored Neal learning so many things about himself - including loving and now being loved. Thank you for sharing!

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hoosierbitch November 2 2013, 21:23:53 UTC
I feel like Neal sometimes - like I'm learning things about myself for the first time.

I'm so happy that this resonated with you. I feel like I'm in that same place, too! Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. ♥

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ladyrose42 October 25 2013, 17:43:55 UTC
Part of this reminded of Runaway Bride, where the female character liked whatever her boyfriend liked. One can see Neal not really knowing what he liked because of running cons. That is so sweet.
The realization of his new love story, so sweet too.

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hoosierbitch November 2 2013, 21:24:09 UTC
I'll have to see that movie! Thanks so much for the lovely comment. :-)

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china_shop October 25 2013, 19:46:01 UTC
Eeeeeeee, this is utterly fabulous! I love it!! akjsdhfakjs dflkshd fkajshdf sakjhf adsfafdlkjh sdfkajshd fasdfds

Especially love omniscient Moz. <3 <3 <3

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hoosierbitch November 2 2013, 21:24:34 UTC
Yay! Thank you so much for the lovely keyboard!smash.

*huge grin*

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caseyf123 October 26 2013, 04:45:37 UTC
This was just too cute. I love how Mozzie knew Neal better than he knew himself. Just a sweet feel good kinda story story. Gotta love it.

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hoosierbitch November 2 2013, 21:24:43 UTC
Thank you so much! :D

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