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PotC Drabble - "Story Spinning"

Dec 02, 2009 01:10

Wow...three weeks in a row that I've written a drabble. I'm not sure what's going on! :P This one's for the prompt "charming" at blackpearlsails .

I actually came up with three different scenerios for this prompt, but finally decided on this one. I hope you enjoy.

Title: Story Spinning
Author: hope27
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Jack, Jack/Elizabeth (kind of ( Read more... )

potc, fic, je

Comments 10

geekmama December 2 2009, 14:13:59 UTC

Charming rogue indeed. He's very hard to resist, and it's easy to see why here. Great drabble!

hope27 December 7 2009, 11:29:02 UTC

Thanks! Oh, Jack is definately hard to resist, especially to a girl like Lizzie who's been dreaming of adventure her whole life.

Glad you liked!

pearlseed December 2 2009, 14:15:56 UTC

Tasty treat this with some gems tucked neatly inside.
"Dangerous lips curved into that familiar half-smile and his voice lilted upwards" really clear pic here of our pirate!

"A wicked grin and knowing glint in his charcol eyes could persuade even the most skeptical and coldest of sailors." This is just lucious! I can see those sparkling wicked ways of his clear as day! Yep, liked this.

hope27 December 7 2009, 11:30:40 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed and I love to hear what lines you thought really stood out! Whenever Jack really wants something, his voice gets this extra little lilt to it, and it just sounds like warm carmel.

Thanks for reading and commenting again! :)

sharklady35 December 2 2009, 15:35:41 UTC

I'm quite able to believe Jack shall retain his yarn-spinning talent well into his later years. And his 'dangerous lips', too. Scoundrel...

hope27 December 7 2009, 11:31:54 UTC

Oh, most definately. He'll be an old pirate still spinning tales to anyone who will listen, and, of course, that will probably be most anyone who is around. He has a way of pulling just about everyone in if he really wants to!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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hope27 December 7 2009, 11:32:56 UTC

Ah, who is the they? With Jack, one never knows...

Nope, your not reading too much into it at all! ;)

Glad you enjoyed!

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hope27 December 7 2009, 11:33:46 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for commenting. I appreciate it!

And there is just something about that icon...yum!