Baby, It's Cold Outside (Chapter Four: The Thaw)

[hope813]

Title: Baby, It's Cold Outside
Author: hope813
Pairing: Finn/Rachel
Rating: PG
Warnings:Through "Sectionals"
Disclaimer: Sadly, this world is not mine.
Summary:Rachel has given up on Finn for good and that's that. Right?

***NOW COMPLETE***

Comments

[hope813]

Thank so much! I appreciate your feedback. I am glad that you enjoyed it. I felt like we all needed some good Finn/Rachel romance and humor, so I wanted to end on that note!

[hope813]

Aw, thank you! I recreated the bowling alley scene in another story, "Couples Counseling," so I figured it was time to recreate another favorite Finchel moment.

[hope813]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I just added that line after posting the story. I was re-reading it for errors and thought the paragraph needed something! A few have probably read the story without that line! ; )

By the way, I figured out another reason why I need you! I was re-reading previous chapters and noticed that I used semi-colons twice when I should have used colons! I am a sorry excuse for an English teacher!

[elimaru]

RACHEL PWNS THIS ENTIRE CHAPTER. :D

My favorite line:
He made it sound as though she were Glenn Close in Fatal Attraction. Her portrayal of the rejected mistress-turned-stalker had damaged the reputation of all women, her dads had told her. They still contended that the movie had been single-handedly responsible for increasing the gay male population in the 80’s.
BAHAHA! xD Very clever, my dear!

I loved the ending, too! This story was so cute. :) I hope to see more from you again soon!

[hope813]

Haha! I like that part, too. I feel like I come up with one killer line per story. ; )

I'm glad you liked Rachel here. There were so many moments that I really wanted to switch over and get inside of Finn's head! I SO love writing from Finn's point of view. I love Rachel, but it's so much fun trying to figure out what Finn would be thinking at any given moment.

As for more stories...oy. I have five started and I am stalled on all of them. I feel like I need to chuck them or, at the very least, take a break from them. I need a new idea. So, I'll take a cue from you and Ali. Any prompts you want to throw my way? Go for it! No promises, but maybe inspiration will strike!

[elimaru]

I suggest a Valentine's Day story as a sequel to this story. It could begin 7 days before their 1st Valentine's day as a couple and Finn is freaking out because he has no clue what to do, what to give her, if he should take her to dinner or something else, etc...7 chapters, one for each day. Finn's point of view, since you so enjoy that ;)

[hope813]

Seven chapters? WOW. I'll try, but that is kind of intimidating...I'm starting to feel as panicked as Finn in this scenario! Thanks for the prompt and I'll do my best!

Now, I expect more from you, too! ; ) I absolutely loved the fic you dedicated to me. That was ten different shades of awesome! Still, I am greedy. Quick, write more before school starts again! When do you go back to the grind?

[caddyeverafter7]

Awe, sorry I'm a late reviewer.

Cute ending ^^ I don't think the singing was cheesy at all. Thanks for giving me a great story to read ^^

[hope813]

Thanks for all of your feedback! I really appreciated each comment. I am glad that you enjoyed it!