A Different Side Of Bert

[hopehavikk]

- Title: A Different Side Bert
- Author: hopehavikk
- Pairing: B&G
- Rating: PG/PG-13 At The Most
- POV: Bert
- Summary: A cute fluff fic. that I made in class.
- Disclaimer: Not real. All fake. Story is my own. Characters belong to themselves. This never happened.
- Author Notes: This is my first fan fiction type deal...so, I'd really like to know

Comments

[xstunt_pilots]

better than my first try at fanfic! x3

i have a weak spot for fluff. and this is pure, adorable fluff. *hugs*

but a couple things:
1- paragraphs are your friend. it's kinda late and i kept getting lost.
2- there are a bunch of easily-avoided typos, and i think getting a beta would help ya.

other than that, you seem to be a good writer and i hope to see more from you!

xjulia
p.s. i beta

[hopehavikk]

awe, thank you.
(:

next fic i write...
would you mind, like...
doing beta on it or w/e?
>_<

<3hope(:

[xstunt_pilots]

haha, yes, i'll be happy to beta you. just email me your next chappy!

psycho.zine@yahoo.com

;]

[hopehavikk]

:D
thankyou!

[msbrtmccracken]

AWWWWWWW =D !!!
that was the cutest thing everrrr <333

[hopehavikk]

hahaha.
thank you.
that made me smile.
:D

[deadbbekickball]

awww, this was adorbaleee. :]

but yes, paragraphs are your friend dear.
other than that, wonderful. ^_^