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Mar 03, 2011 14:09

Title: Home
Author: hopeintheashes
Characters: Dean, Lisa, Ben, Sam
Genre/Pairing: Hurt/Comfort. Past Dean/Lisa and Gen.
Rating: PG-13 for language
Word-count: 1650
Spoilers: Through 6.14
Summary: Missing scenes from 6.14: Dean’s drowning under the weight of everything he’s lost, and how much of it for which he’s to blame.
Disclaimer: Definitely not mine. That ( Read more... )

fanfiction, supernatural

Comments 8

borgmama1of5 March 4 2011, 02:47:04 UTC

Oh god, this hurt so much!

hopeintheashes March 4 2011, 03:57:08 UTC

Dean breaks my heart on a regular basis-- I almost cried when I was writing the scene with him and Ben. I'm glad it was effective!

kat_of_rafters March 5 2011, 04:35:03 UTC

It came out beautifully. Not that I expected anything different.

You did much better with the whole reigning in sentence length thing and this draft somehow has even more emotional oomph than the first. Nice music choice too ^_^

hopeintheashes March 5 2011, 21:26:51 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad there was emotional oomph. That was the goal. :-)

kat_of_rafters March 6 2011, 21:04:11 UTC

I don't think it's possible for you to write anything that doesn't have emotional oomph :)

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hopeintheashes March 12 2011, 15:10:09 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :-) And you're right-- the whole thing is even more significant post-6.16. At least they still have each other.

turquoisetumult April 16 2011, 16:02:14 UTC

This was lovely! Written like poetry. Great job.

hopeintheashes April 16 2011, 20:39:43 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.