Pratique de la langue - number 2

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Dodo, you asked for it, here it is.  Enjoy!

9 janvier 2006, exam de pratique de la langue.

Sujet : Write a short story, using past tenses, which includes at some point the sentence 'And then she said, "Hello".'

Length : 250-300 WORDS.

Comments

I know I said it already

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but I love what goes on in James' head...
He's smitten!

Love it girl!
Dodo...*

Re: I know I said it already

[hopeless_cases]

Thanks! I don't think I'll have a bad grade, but I'm not satisfied with it, and I can't figure why!
Arg.

'M'gonna sleep now, the late night I had left me with neuronal sequels, I think.

Seeyah!
Essa