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[hopeletgo]

Alright, so last night I asked for someone to give me a writing prompt because I was really bored and needed something to do. Jill gave me one and here is the result and I realize that the majority of it is dialogue but I wrote this pretty quickly. That said if you find any typos or errors there all mine.

The prompt was: Troy (in an) Elevator (with

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[stinabug87]

Haven't read yet but I will be reading it soon. :)
I will comment back on this prompt.

[hopeletgo]

Can't wait to hear what you think. :D

[jewel2502]

Awww, this story is beautiful. The beginning was a little strange. I didn´t like the dialogue part there, but from the middle to the end, it was just amazing. I hope you´re really gonna write a sequel. It´s would be very appropriate. :D

And tell me if you ever need a prompt. :D

[hopeletgo]

The part in italics was Troy's thoughts in case you didn't understand. I should have stated that in the beginning. Just curious, where did you start liking it?

Thanks and I'm def. going to write a sequel and believe me I will def. ask for a prompt. I in the middle of another one for Jill but as soon as I finish with that one. I am at you beck and call.

Clara

[stinabug87]

Very cute Clara. I didn't really like the beginning either b/c the way Troy was thinking about Gabriella. I really liked the rest though. So cute. Definetly would love to read the sequel. Talk to you soon. :)
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[hopeletgo]

Do you think it would read better if I took out Troy's thoughts? :D

[stinabug87]

I like the thoughts in the story I just didn't like that Troy's thoughts were that he didn't want to see/talk to Gabriella. :)
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[hopeletgo]

Oh, well Troy is silly like that. :D