I think parts of this are kinda rushed, but I know how hard it can be to write action scenes and make them full of juicy detail. The outlines you've given are enough to paint the picture in my mind and I have to say that I could totally see this showdown as part of a movie. The fact that Rachel and the other girls came up to lend their strength to Finn is really awesome and Terri deserves what she got.
I hate, hate, hate writing action scenes. It can never describe them right. So I just kind of zip through them. I love doing the slow build with a lot of character focus more. That way I'm still getting a story out there but no action sequences!!!
One of the first images I had writing this fic (after the Winn kiss) was the girls coming to drag Terri to a bad place. Will doesn't get the blame on him since he was trying to redeem himself. *nods* That's exactly what happened.
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One of the first images I had writing this fic (after the Winn kiss) was the girls coming to drag Terri to a bad place. Will doesn't get the blame on him since he was trying to redeem himself. *nods* That's exactly what happened.
But I'm glad you were able to visualize it. :D
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