Hidden Intentions (Part 12/?)

[hoperoy]

Title: Hidden Intentions (Part 12/?)
Author: hoperoy
Fandom: Smallville
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Clark/Lex,
Word count: 2,967
Warnings: Dubious seduction, vague spoilers for "Justice," and mpreg.
Summary: After a failed mission for the fledgling Justice League, Clark finds himself completely at Lex's mercy. When Clark begins to feel sick, Lex's real

Comments

[twinsarein]

Wow! The top half was what Clark has always wanted - a pretty normal life; then what a change in the second half, as usally happens with these two. Just as things appear normal they go all to hell.

In the first half I loved Lex's interactions with Clark - very loving and sweet. Also, how Clark mentions the things he does to help care for Lex, most of them without Lex knowing. Clark is learning cleverness and stealth as he matures.

In the 2nd half I really enjoyed the awesome description of what is happening during the kidnapping. I felt like I could see it through your words. I am looking forward to finding out who these guys are and why Lex seems to know them.

[hoperoy]

The top half was what Clark has always wanted - a pretty normal life; then what a change in the second half, as usally happens with these two.

It was kind of an odd two parts to put together, but in the end it just sort of seemed to work.

I am looking forward to finding out who these guys are and why Lex seems to know them.

Lex does know them. Clark does, too, actually. He just doesn't know it yet.

[rednihilist]

Eek! What a doozy of a cliffhanger. . . especially after that wonderful Clex scene. *bites nails* Oh, God, what's going to happen now?

:) Great job with the contrast here, and I just loved how you ratcheted up the tension so quickly!

[hoperoy]

I'm glad that quick switch of tones worked so well. I was worried that it wouldn't. Thanks for reading!

[rosy5000]

Not nice... going from relatively happy domestic scene with a caring Lex and adorable Lena to Clark and Lena being kidnapped. :(

Dysfunctional, perhaps, but still good.

lol That describes Clark and Lex perfectly.

[hoperoy]

That describes Clark and Lex perfectly.

They might be messed up, but we still love them (and they love each other). ;)

[kuhekabir]

wow now that is a turn i never saw comming, excellent update...thank you...more?

[hoperoy]

I've actually got to go look over the next section and get it off to my beta!

[danceswithgary]

I like the way you're pulling this together. The progression into the 'action' is a nice touch. :-D

[hoperoy]

Thanks! :)