[fic] london's burning

Mar 11, 2013 19:18

kibum/minho // nc-17 // 3,200+ words.

kibum finds out the real reason why minho had been avoiding him during their trip to london.

kibum didn't understand... )

r: nc-17, p: kibum/minho, b: shinee

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loveshineebang March 11 2013, 23:20:41 UTC
Thanks for sharing minkey's "passion" at London... :)
They are so sexy and horny... Hope that they still have their passion when they back to Korea... X)
And btw, could you edit the word hyung to key or kibum maybe, because minho never call key, hyung (I think the other readers have the same thought)... Thanks in advance... ^^

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hoppus_delonge March 11 2013, 23:23:10 UTC
thank you for reading! :)

and if you don't mind can i keep it as hyung? because i've heard minho call kibum hyung many times (and he is older) and idk that's just the way i see him? i apologise if you don't like it, but thank you very much for the concrit! :)

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loveshineebang March 12 2013, 02:57:09 UTC
-,- ugh, okay, it's your story so it's up to you...

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hoppus_delonge March 12 2013, 20:12:47 UTC
if you really want me to fix it then i will? i'm sorry.

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boggywuggypop March 12 2013, 15:48:39 UTC
He has never called Key hyung.... Not unless I've missed it in the almost 4years I've been in the fandom... But yeah, totally your story. Just. It's a thing for most. Ohwell.

Hot hot hot!! Was looking for my fix of Minkey smut for the night & found it! WOOT! <33

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hoppus_delonge March 12 2013, 20:14:46 UTC
i'm really glad that you like this, and i've changed the 'hyung' thing now and i'm sorry if you didn't like that >

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boggywuggypop March 13 2013, 14:30:28 UTC
I'm sorry I think we sound like we're imposing on you. Just, it's a teeny pet peeve for most Minkey shippers. Unless the story was AU & the age difference was clearly laid down. I hope it did not discourage you to write some more? This was really nice, tbrh. :)

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hoppus_delonge March 13 2013, 15:42:06 UTC
Well to be honest it's my first time writing minkey and I don't even ship it that much so I guess it was certain that there were going to be some inaccuracies haha. But thank you for the heads up, I won't make that mistake in the future. :) I'm glad you liked it anyway!

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