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[Fanfic] And All That Jazz 3/?

Dec 18, 2010 00:52

Title: And All That Jazz
Pairings: Alfred (US)/ Arthur (UK)
Characters: America, England, with a special appearance of Canada
Rating: T for language. (Will go up higher)
Warnings: America has a bit of a sailor's mouth
Summary: Alfred is approached by the Student Body President, Arthur, for help on his math exam. They hate each other, but maybe ( Read more... )

Comments 25

itachi00sasuke December 18 2010, 10:25:17 UTC

yayayayayay I'm so happy to see this!
you know I'm having vacation ;D and it's snowing. A LOT. so my waterpolo games are canceled -SAD-

SO THIS REALLY MADE MY DAY <3
I loved it Hoshi =w=

oh god a band name ehm... shit I'm bad with band names =3= I VOTE FOR GRAMMAR NAZI XD

hoshiko2 December 19 2010, 05:25:59 UTC

Oooo, have a great vacation!

I'm glad I made your day sweetie. I checked my comments from my sister's phone and when I saw yours, it made mine too. <3

riiyacub December 18 2010, 12:00:16 UTC

d'awwwwwwww, Alfie! Artie! SO CUTE.

"Go back to Russia...." That's funny - IN AMERICA!

And in other countries too! :D

hoshiko2 December 19 2010, 05:32:16 UTC

YAY!

undone_reading December 18 2010, 13:16:02 UTC

Yay, another chapter. Poor Alfred... I'm glad he has Arthur. I'm about to go take a final, and this was a very nice surprise!

hoshiko2 December 19 2010, 05:27:19 UTC

Haha! Surprise! Good luck on your final! :3

thisiskanta December 18 2010, 15:58:04 UTC

oh my goodness, the direction you are going with this fic is just hnnngg. I was screaming with joy (so early in the morning) once I saw that you had updated hehe! You got in depth with the characters (mostly Al-- awww such a bad home life, I just want to hug him).

What? YGO Abridged references? I didn't catch any. XD -bad reader then- Now I'm gonna have to go back and read this chapter again (not that I mind~) to find them haha.

The kiss scene is rather sweet~ *A*

hoshiko2 December 19 2010, 05:29:08 UTC

Oh my goodness, you screamed? That was like me last night when I saw Liete had updated her AU. Lol.

"Everyone, I'd like you all to meet Bakura from England. He's from another country so be sure to pick on him."
"Hello everyone. It's bloody nice to meet you all."
"Is he a girl?"
"GO BACK TO RUSSIA!"

thisiskanta December 21 2010, 18:52:51 UTC

LOLOLOL. WHY DIDN'T I CATCH THOSE!

juliet_ros December 18 2010, 18:59:54 UTC

Not only is he new here, but he's also British. So feel free to bully him like crazy. :)

hoshiko2 December 19 2010, 05:29:27 UTC

YES!