[Fanfic] Stumbleine

[hoshiko2]

Title: Stumbleine (the written version)
Characters/Pairings: Alfred (US) /(UK) Arthur
Rating: PG13 (just to be safe for angst)
Warnings: Human names used, big angst and sadness
Summary: A Christmas gift to my dear big brother hakuku. Based on her superb doujin Stumbleine (you should read it!).
"Alfred attempts to play a game with time in order gain back what

Comments

[hakuku]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH OMG OK BRB READING THIS BUT FREAKING OUT FIRST

[hoshiko2]

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[hakuku]

AH ok i'm sorry for the incredibly late review, i had to do some chores, some work, and then internet decided to crap out on me for a few hours T_T

[hoshiko2]

Ah, it's cool. I had a friend who follows you on twitter lettin' me know what was going on. I have to admit, when I started reading your comment, I got REALLY nervous, especially when you started explaining the entire music notes. I didn't want to originally put them in, but when I read them I thought, "Well...these kinda sound like Al's thought process at the time" and since a lot of Al's emotions were virtually mine of when I lost my love, I just went with it. But I'm so so glad you liked it. I worked on it for days and kept rewriting entire sections. Plus, I felt the epilogue was too rushed, but since you liked it, that is all that matters

[butterflies_inc]

OMG OMG OMG THIS VERSION....
just adding the already amazing doujin into beautiful words!!!! askjdakjg
Hakuku and You really are the best!!!!!
i'm so glad for reading your works!!!!!

[hoshiko2]

Haha, thanks so much! That means a lot to me considering how much work I put in in to even come close to the feeling in Haku's story.

[chiisana00]

Speechless ;____; -Cries-

[hoshiko2]

*Gives tissue.* I-I hope that's a good thing. >>

[hetalia17]

I re-read through this twice, and have been bawling like a baby since first reading of Arthur's death. I hadn't read hukaka's doujin before, but now I am. And I'm still in tears. ;w; This is such a heart-wrenching story...bittersweet and beautiful.

[hoshiko2]

Thank you so much! Haku's doujin is extremely touching and I wanted to add just a little bit more with my own take on the story as a thank you to my friend.

But no more crying. *Hands you a tissue.*

Amazing!

[poisonoustiger]

I just finished reading hakuku's dj and she had posted a link to your fic. Wow. Well done! You stayed true to her original dialog and action, and also gave depth to let us see emotions and thoughts. This felt like seeing a movie and then reading a really well-written version of that movie in a novel. I'm amazed (I'm sorry I'm unable to articulate how happy you've made me with this fic). Thank you for writing this.

Re: Amazing!

[hoshiko2]

You're so very welcome! I'm excited that you loved it so much.

Now, let me shameless promote myself and direct you to my sequel I wrote her for her birthday located her: http://kokoro2.livejournal.com/8581.html#cutid1