[Fanfic] And All That Jazz 4/?

[hoshiko2]

Title: And All That Jazz
Pairings: Alfred (US)/ Arthur (UK)
Characters: America, England, with a special appearance of Canada, France, and Poland
Rating: T for language. (Will go up higher)
Warnings: America has a bit of a sailor's mouth, UST
Summary: Alfred is approached by the Student Body President, Arthur, for help on his math exam. They hate

Comments

[thisiskanta]

*gigglefest* UST. UST. *spins around on her computer chair* Squeeeee! When I read this chapter, I couldn't help but to love the names Alfred was coming up with. When he got to "and all that jazz" I screamed. I really did! Call me corny or dorky like Alfred, but I would love it if you went with that name for their band hehehe! <3 Come on Arthur, agree to the name!

And YOU ADDED FRANCIS. <3 You have no idea how much that makes my day! ROFL I love that guy so much-- he's like the little push to their relationship, whether Artie likes it or now xDD

That last part of the story was MMMMMFFFF <3 So sexy. I can't wait until they get it on for reals. But I am very concerned for Alfred. =/

[hoshiko2]

HAHA! Well, I had a few reviewers on FF.net asking if he would make an appearance. In the original idea (the short version), he wasn't. Neither was Poland. Hell, there wasn't even a back story. So I'm really glad that my sudden changes are being so well received.

Ah, fear not for Al. He is the hero, after all. :3

[mizu_from_kumo]

Your welcome for the names, It was cool to see them there. -is a huge nut about stuff like that-

Want to know what's wrong with Alfred. -whines-

[hoshiko2]

You'll find out. It won't be pleasant, but he has a very loving boyfriend to be there for him.

And thanks again for the names! Sorry I didn't end up using them, but I might have one in mind for a title of a song they play.

[binni]

Oh, cripe, I dunno if I can properly wait for the next chapter! alskdfj I am saving this fic to my computer aldskfjasldkfjasldkfj. So lovely~ I love their chemistry, I really, really do!

Alfred will tell him what's going on, right? D:

[hoshiko2]

Haha, fear not! The next chapter is only a few days away. :3

maybe, maybe not

[kasumicc]

SQUEE ~ Perfect UST, and the way their relationship has been developing is absolutely lovely, to say it the least. Poor Arthur's jealous, I don't blame him ^^' And Alfred's backstory keeps getting interesting! :O

[hoshiko2]

Ah good. I was told it was going a little too fast, so I'm glad someone thinks it's developing nicely. That's a good thing to know. :3

[undone_reading]

Oh no. I don't trust Alfred's dad, something bad's going to go down, I just know it!
Still, I loved this chapter and I'm glad you decided to expand the story.

[hoshiko2]

Oh yes, something very bad will happen soon. Fear not, he has Arthur to comfort him. :3