[Fanfic] And All That Jazz 5/?

[hoshiko2]

Title: And All That Jazz
Pairings: Alfred (US)/ Arthur (UK)
Characters: America, England, with  Canada, France, Poland, and Lithuania
Rating: M
Warnings: America has a bit of a sailor's mouth and sex on a piano
Summary: Alfred is approached by the Student Body President, Arthur, for help on his math exam. They hate each other, but maybe opposite

Comments

[thisiskanta]

I'm just gonna word vomit the things that popped into my mind while reading.

Eeeee! Arthur you little cutie you. *squee* it's so cute when he's all blushy like a tomato.

OMG FRANCIS. He's so awesome in this fic, you don't even know! xD I approve of him making that boyfriend comment!

YOU WENT WITH AND ALL THAT JAZZ! *grins like an idiot*

LOLOL Poor Roddy. His piano has been tainted. But it's a a good sacrifice for the purpose of yummy usuk sex mmmmm. *drools at sex scene* An you managed to make it sapppy/sweet! My favorite combination awwwww. ;~; they finally confessed yaaay! I like how you transitioned it from Alfred singing a song about Arthur's eyes. <3

Also for some reason, I kept thinking of the song "We No Speak Americano" for some reason every time I imagined jazz music haha.

THIS IS MORE THAN WHAT I CAN ASK FOR IN A PROMPT. ;___; I have to admit that I can't think of anything on the spot if you ask me, but seeing that you put a note at the end, I have a heads up so that's good. XD

[hoshiko2]

HAHA! I'm so glad you liked it.

I had trouble with Francis as he's not one of my favorite characters in the series, but I knew he had to be there. He'll become a more important and prominent figure in the upcoming chapters.

And take your time. The next chapter has already been mapped up and I know that there is still some UST and sexy timez ahead. >3

[iggyxalfie]

awwwww so cute hoshi (this is cindy again)
LOOOOVEEEE IT <3333333333

[hoshiko2]

I'm so happy you do my dear! :3

[hoshiko2]

Oh, I was worried someone would hate on that line. I've always wanted to use it. :3

YAY! I'M LOVED! I love you too. *Hugs.*

And yes, we will. It'll take awhile, but you'll learn why eventually. Alfred just needs to learn trust.

[ladedanixie]

I second the awesomeness of that line. This chapter was so cute and sweet. Also Alfred why are you such an incredbly kickass boyfriend? And then, theres Arthur who is, for the lack of a better word, so damn cute.
Kudos to you for a great chap. ^_^

[hoshiko2]

Haha, he's kickass because HE'S THE HERO! *sparkle sparkle.*

[medev]

Again I just can said BEAUTIFUL. Alfret is so lovely and Arturh so cute >.<
the piano scene was great. loved it <3

[hoshiko2]

That poor piano. Lol.