[Fanfic] And All That Jazz 9/?

[hoshiko2]

Title: And All That Jazz
Pairings: Alfred (US)/ Arthur (UK)
Characters: America and England
Rating: G
Warnings: SAAAAP
Summary: Alfred is approached by the Student Body President, Arthur, for help on his math exam. They hate each other, but maybe opposites can attract with the help of something unexpected.
This chapter: Valentine'

Comments

[thisiskanta]

what's wrong with American TV? :I

ANYWAYS, thanks for letting me know you updated. This was a very, very warm and fuzzy chapter indeed. o3o I can't believe you said this chapter was hard to write-- I think it was your best chapter of the fic hehe (I'm a sucker for sappiness...)

their dedication to each other is just wonderful! <3 I like that you used Alfred's POV because honestly, there isn't enough of it! (though the part about his family worried me again; well just his dad). And Arthur is cute as usual hehe, that little tsundere. XD rofl, I giggled when I got to the part where Al said someone mistaken Artie lookin' girl from the back. I can imagine Arthur turning even more redder (more than tomato red), and sputtering cutely huhu.

=w= and now I sleep... this fluff nyah~~

[hoshiko2]

I always enjoy telling you it's up. :3
I'm always most nervous about major sap and romance, thinking it's nowhere near up to par the other writers on the USUK comm. So I just get all insecure. But I'm glad you liked it. :3

[hoshiko2]

*Throws a Phoenix Down at you.* There, no more death. Lol
Ah, well, you know. The writers I watch are superb, so I can't help it. Though I feel more and more confident with every chapter.

[barnaby]

Thank you for the watch back ^^

I followed you over here from FF, I absolutely adore this story. I'm actually sick and I found the fic last night and spent a couple hours before bed reading it XD it really cheered me up &hearts

I will now read this new chapter ' 3 '

[hoshiko2]

I never turn down new friends. I'm happy you added me! :3
Oh no! Please get better. I'm glad my story could bring you some joy. The next few chapters will be quiet silly and romantic, so less angst and drama for awhile. :3

[ladedanixie]

Yea! A new update and it's so sappy I could die! Ohh, I love it. The whole chapter was pure cuteness rolled up into even more cuteness. Also, I find it hilarious that Arthur got mistaken for a girl from behind. Alfred is definitely never letting him live that down. LOL

*yawn* Its pretty late.
Lovely chapter Hoshi.
Til next time,
hugs and kisses, nixie.

[hoshiko2]

So sappy, I'm like a tree. I thought you guys would like something sweet for a change. :3

[sillyjasdero]

waaaai!!! I love that picture and I love the way you wrote about it!!! *fangirls like crazy*

more more more please!

[hoshiko2]

I'm glad you liked the picture and the fix! :3 I adored it and went, "ok, it's going in." lol

[youngforever07]

You write pretty damn fast!

I love how you used the clothes in Hima-papa's official art and incorporated them in the story. I also love how they both waited for each other for hours. If I were their place I would've left my date and make him eat dirt the next day.

<3

[hoshiko2]

I'm on winter break. Once school starts up in two weeks, there won't be as many updates from me. Sadly...