[Fanfic] And All That Jazz 10/?

[hoshiko2]

Title: And All That Jazz
Pairings: Alfred (US)/ Arthur (UK)
Characters: America and England with the band and two new members!
Rating: R
Warnings: Language and sex
Summary: Alfred is approached by the Student Body President, Arthur, for help on his math exam. They hate each other, but maybe opposites can attract with the help

Comments

[kt_lovely341]

Unf. There is SO much I like about this chapter! The awkward sex was just amazing, and with the emotions it was even more amazing.

Plus you added España (and Gilbert) to the mix, which I absolutely LOVE you for.

Arthur had better do something amazing for Al's birthday!

[hoshiko2]

Haha, oh he will. And I had to bring in the duo to make the trio! ;3

[ladedanixie]

Hello, I haven't commented in awhile but now Iam! I loved this chapter and also I'm glad thier first time wasn't exactly perfect it ties into the fact that its thier "first time" so of course there are gonna a few flukes. LOL Gilbert and Antonio seem like trouble and I like that. LOL I just amped to see what happens next.
hugs and kisses,
ladedanixie

[hoshiko2]

Thank you so much. You're, like, the first person to understand that not all sex is perfect roses. :3

You won't have to be stuck in suspension for long. I'll be updating later today. :3333

[supertobi]

I just started reading this fic after seeing your consistant updates and comments (I figured it MUST be good, and I assure you, it is ♥) and I have to say...

..... I freaking love you for making that Princess and the Frog reference, you made my life ♥♥♥ (you'll have to excuse me, I'm a big Disney nerd and that is my current favorite Disney movie xD)

Anyway, what a wonderful chapter, and bawww their first time how precious. Look forward to more! ♥

[hoshiko2]

Haha! Thank you so much! I update often because I'm crazy. Lol.

[medev]

"And I cherish every moment we're together." When I read that I was like "Oh Al you have to take him now!!!" and yey XD it happened.
it wasn't like I had imagined their firts time to be. but I liked how it was somehow clumsy but still very emotional.