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hoshiko2

[Fanfic] And All That Jazz 16/20

Jan 20, 2011 13:06

Title: And All That Jazz
Pairings: Alfred (US)/ Arthur (UK)
Characters: America and England with Bad Touch Trio and Matthew
Rating: PG
Warnings: Mentions of character death
Summary: Alfred is approached by the Student Body President, Arthur, for help on his math exam. They hate each other, but maybe opposites ( Read more... )

Comments 8

thisiskanta January 20 2011, 21:10:25 UTC

First comment spot >:I time to read!

real review thisiskanta January 20 2011, 21:23:59 UTC

I was bracing myself for the sad parts of the chapter, but as I was reading along, I felt... iono bubbly and warm in the first 2/3 of it. maybe I'm just in a good mood, because everything that wasn't towards the end of the chapter was rather... uplifting and warm. (or maybe it was the BTT haha I love those guys)

once I got to the ending, I got sad. D8 and I wasn't really expecting that because I'm so used to Arthur being annoyed by Peter or something in most fanfics I've read (and in canon), so having him miss his brother and is guilty/sad about his death was rather a shock for me. ;_; And ahhh Arthur being hydrophobic for that reason awww...

Re: real review hoshiko2 January 20 2011, 21:53:36 UTC

It was meant to be warm and fuzzy so then I could just DROP A TON OF PAIN ON YA! >3 /cruel

ah, despite England's obvious annoyance with Sealand, I see them as being typical brothers. I think England would be VERY sad if anything were happen to Sealand. Didn't England help Sealand when there was a fire?

sillyjasdero January 21 2011, 05:22:13 UTC

OMG OMG OMG!!!! SO CLOSE!!!

aw... *pats Arthur* don't be too hard on yourself... I'll cry if you cry Q,Q
can't wait for Alfred's secret!!!
an FST would be welcome!

hoshiko2 January 21 2011, 06:25:45 UTC

Another FST is okay? Have any ideas for a song?

lizz0427 January 21 2011, 18:42:33 UTC

YESS!! finally, Arthurs backstory is so sad... but it had to come out. such a cute scene (btw, did they just totally forget to go see if Mattie won the talent show? XD poor Mattie XD ( ... )

hoshiko2 January 22 2011, 16:12:33 UTC

I love long reviews. :3

In my experience with life, everyone has something. Life is just that way. However for good drama I made their shot worse than normal. I'm just cruel.

There already was one FST that had jazz if you'd like to see it. The second one would have no jazz at all. But we'll see. Still thinking about it.

medev April 23 2011, 17:42:51 UTC

so touching ;_; loved this chapter.