One Brief Shining Moment

Mar 15, 2011 12:51

One Brief Shining Moment

It’s in the back room of a hardware store in Chelsea (after seven straight hours of editing video on his laptop while watching his movie’s subject paint on the floor in front of him) that Alfred finds the glimpse of humanity he’s been longing for since forever.

It’s one of the early nights, one where he was still a ( Read more... )

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sephydark March 17 2011, 05:53:41 UTC
That was really nice. It makes me wonder a bit about what the backstory behind those two is. You certainly make it sound like there was quite a bit.

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kasumicc March 26 2011, 00:39:43 UTC
The best kind of porn :D I like how both of them are actually artist, and I really have to wonder how the painting ended out to be x'D

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daemon_angelus March 27 2011, 17:06:23 UTC
HAS BEEN MEANING TO REVIEW SINCE LIKE FOREVERRRRRRRRR

but could only do up a proper one now )': do forgive.

THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. I saw it on FF.net, and omg, just. blew my mind :'D Arthur reminded me a lot of Banksy so that was just awesome~

I just love the way you phrased it, Alfred finds the glimpse of humanity he’s been longing for since forever. your descriptions are just ACE. (man I've never used that word before LOL YOU RENDER ME INCOHERENT WITH YOUR BRILLIANT WRITING)

Arthur and Alfred's interaction (before the lead up to sex) was just amazing ♥ so much love for Alfred saying Arthur's just gorgeous, doing what he does 83

locks his ankles around the back legs of the chair, forcing himself forward all along Alfred’s front, chest to groin, tilting Alfred’s head to follow -- my fav description (ノ゚▽゚)ノ

He gets the point. -- I see what you did thar |D

“You’ve turned into an artist.” -- this is just perfect ♥

In the end, he cuts the scene from his project completely. -- no words can describes how much I love this ending 83 ( ... )

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