'Hidden'

[hotchocolate29]

A stray, unshed teardrop,

Reflecting the grey skies

and the grimy city beyond,

Lingers in the eye
clouding  the vision.

I let it lay where it rests

Hard and poised on the curve of the eye

balanced with this overwhelming hurt

which cannot be quite expressed.

Comments

[suku]

Exquisite.

[hotchocolate29]

Cheers dear namesake.

[supersam5]

Very nicely expressed!

[hotchocolate29]

Thanks Sam, you must be back in India now. I liked the Scottish cake recipe.

[rainyinterludes]

beautiful thought...

[hotchocolate29]

I like your icon - what is it? Liked the majhi song - it was the one that switched between bangla and hindi, right?

[rainyinterludes]

han oi gantai. eta ekta woodcut er kaj by an artist called M.C.Esher. Amar orkut r chabitai or-besh interesting otao.

[shaluvk]

very evocative, my friend. only that i would have you banish that tear and dismiss the hurt from your presence! on a flip note- i felt like howling too when dravid opted to field first last night and the indians lost wickets like crazy chasing 288.

[hotchocolate29]

I know, I was meant to go see the match but had work and then saw the scores and decided it was a lost cause! Hope we do better in the next one! Tears have been banished!:)

[hotchocolate29]

Thank you - how is your work going?