Contradiction

Nov 01, 2007 22:54

                                            Nowhere but where you are is good

I rarely dream of you now. You slipped out of my life without any fuss like a quietly closed door that has magically shrunk like the ones in  Alice in Wonderland. There was no warning but maybe I wilfully ignored the signs. I am convinced that you came back one night and ( Read more... )

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rainyinterludes November 2 2007, 04:16:40 UTC
fatafati lekhata-really liked it!

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hotchocolate29 November 2 2007, 13:56:37 UTC
Thanks re, I wasn't sure when I was writing it!:) Its a bit of a mish-mash of ideas that came together! Howz you?

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shaluvk November 2 2007, 08:50:55 UTC
aaaah. lovely reading, me gal.

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hotchocolate29 November 2 2007, 13:57:08 UTC
Thanks for reading Shalu - glad you liked it!!

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aimlesswanderer November 11 2007, 02:55:08 UTC
I am always a sucker for dream-sequences. I especially liked the part in italics. Lot of juicy details to think about!

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hotchocolate29 November 12 2007, 14:35:47 UTC
Thanks, the bit in itlaics was much longer but I re-worked it leaving the imagniation of the readers to do the rest!

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