Fic Commentary: Most Likely Kill You in the Morning

[hotelmontana]

I told you I was going to start doing commentaries. Sometimes I actually do what I say I'm going to do. Not very often, sure. But sometimes.

Here is commentary on Most Likely Kill You in the Morning, which you can read in its entirety by clicking that link. I'm splitting it into three parts, because I sure do babble on. Also I have to

Comments

[grimorie]

oh i always loved reading commentaries, your insights and the 'behind the scenes' look are lovely.