Comments | hotlen: Color My World 2

hotlen

Color My World 2

Jun 10, 2005 22:06

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Comments 5

anonymous June 11 2005, 14:49:12 UTC

I followed your story here from the OC, great job, hope it goes over well in your class.

Not to nitpick (which unfortunately i do a lot) but i noticed this:

CYNTHIA
And it was more important for
you to go out with him then it
was to go out with me?

and just caught that you had forgotten to change the him to her (which gives us a real peek into the story ;-) but i figured you might change it before handing it in.

*claps for you*

theprofile June 11 2005, 14:53:58 UTC

if you read this...(this is Stonehouse btw, i have like 30LJs) I did re-read the story and there are a few times I still have Clay's "he's" and the gay "he's" in there. I think I fixed them all. But ROFL if I didn't! I don't care! Funnier that way!

aikenstrom July 16 2005, 00:23:11 UTC

Hi. I love this. A fucking lot. And I just read like most of it now.

And I'm like bawling my eyes out and you are amazing.

I...I can see John. He's so real. You write him better than anyone I've ever seen.

hotlen July 16 2005, 02:04:52 UTC

thank you. I didn't really like this, but as long as you did.

i swear a new chapter of ItNeverWill is coming, just... going to take awhile

aikenstrom July 18 2005, 01:35:39 UTC

I love it so there. I'm at writing camp now, actuallyyy. And I'm taking a class on screenplays and this is really good.

And yeah I'm addicted to that story. Alot.