Because I Wanted To (part 2)

[hottielibrarian]

Callie clasped Erica's hand to chivalrously and stealthily lead her out of Joe's, dodging and darting through the dense crowd, purposefully avoiding eye contact with anyone to ensure a clean and speedy getaway.  Once they hit the safety of the parking lot, Callie gleefully swung Erica out to her side.  Callie freed Erica's hand, only to wrap her

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[huffm004]

that was great.... Loved when callie couldnt remember about her car, nice update

[hottielibrarian]

Yeah, she was a little preoccupied I guess. Thanks for reading!

[momof4withtwins]

Great update loveing this story hope there will be a part 3 Making out in the car was way HOT!!!!

[mickaela82]

their sloppy kiss ending with an audible "smooch."

*giggles* Smooch indeed! Loving the imagery this sends to my brain!

"You're such a bad liar. You knew where they were the whole-"

Loving mischievous Callie! GO GIRL!

Callie swore to herself that she was going to clear away all of Erica's black clouds. Callie wanted that job for the rest of her life.

I wanted Callie to have that job for the rest of her life, too. SIGH!  WAH!

Fuck me.

That’s what she’s TRYING to do, Erica!

"Callie! Callie! Get off!" With the risk of sounding redundant, that’s what she’s TRYING here. Oh…that’s not what you meant Erica? Whoops! Me and my dirty mind

[hottielibrarian]

sure, go ahead and nitpick...

[mickaela82]

Well, pretty much EVERY fic I've read, has Callie as being an unhealthy eater. And...I don't think it's fair to her. First of all, just because she doesn't have a stick figure, doesn't mean that she eats junk. Secondly, every time she ate something on the show, it was a salad, or a fruit and water. Third, she's pretty athletic: she mentioned mountain climbing and now we find out about Peace Corps. Athletic people are usually healthy eaters. You can't climb mountains if you're not fit. You'll be out of breath after the first mile. Callie mentioned something about nothing comparing to the feeling on being on top of a mountain, making it all worth it (in that episode with the 3 mountain climbers). Just sayin', with all the best intentions, don't shoot :p You're such a great writer, so I just couldn't help it, sorry.

[hottielibrarian]

To be honest, I only started watching GA when Brooke became a regular and I immediately stopped when she left, so I'm not as familiar with Callie's background and/or lifestyle. I don't watch the show anymore so I don't know anything about any mountain climbing or anything. I guess I based that junk food habit on other fic I've read and just assumed it was faithful to the show. And I guess I found it kind of endearing and an interesting contrast to Erica, someone who I assume would be more health conscious. This is all based in nothing and created by the whim of my silly imagination,nothing more. But I appreciate your criticism and always invite any discussion of the characters and/or any of my work. I'm still just shocked people are reading anything I write. Thanks.

[jaguarjg]

I´m really enjoying this, you are a good writer and the chemistry here is great although dispite enjoying this, one question does keep popping up, why dont they just go to Ericas house? Or is my logic getting in the way of the story? Hehe, anyway, I like your style, hoping for more!

[hottielibrarian]

You're too smart for me, I think. Maybe Erica doesn't want to move too fast or gets caught up in the moment or wants to humor Callie, or maybe this writer(me)doesn't know what she's doing. (I think it might be that last option...)
Thanks for reading though!

[jaguarjg]

No you seem to know exactly what you are doing, maybe its just me looking for a place where they wont be interupted ;-) I have to say you have lovely discriptive skills, especialy in the little moments when you dont expect it, "Erica's mind blanked euphorically as she pressed the back of her head into the leather seat and stared up at the steamed-up window above her, faintly spying a section of the starry sky." sentences like that are so visual, they pull me right in and in part one "Erica only heard that Callie wanted her. Firewords illuminated the night sky of Erica's long dormant heart." So lovely, so please continue and ignore my stupid comment, a car is safer for Erica for now...

[hottielibrarian]

No, it wasn't a stupid comment at all! I guess I ignored logistics to create, what I hoped, was a hotter scenario. Lately, I've inexplicably developed this fetish about sexual encounters in backseats of cars. But believe me, I totally invite any discussion and/or criticism of whatever I write. I love discussing Callica and I can't believe people take time out to even read my silly stories, so I appreciate any feedback. Thanks!

[prattle01]

Loved it. :)

[hottielibrarian]

Thanks so much!