Clarity

[hottielibrarian]

The following Saturday, of course, found Erica (and sometimes Callie) lugging Callie's cumbersome cardboard boxes into Callie's bedroom in her sparkly, new apartment.

"I think that's the last of 'em,"  Callie announced, flopping on her stomach on the bare mattress, the bed springs squeaking under her.

"Oh, get up.  I did most of the carrying.  All

Comments

[ilovecsr]

This was brilliant. Hot and sweet and full of win. Thank you :)

[hottielibrarian]

Oh, cool-thanks! That's super sweet of you!

[wolfie259]

SOOOO much better than the ABC version! So sweet. :D

[hottielibrarian]

Yeah, the ABC version kinda sucked. Thanks for the feedback--I totally appreciate it!

[wallsurrender]

"I've never had to try NOT to have an orgasm"...that would be my all time favorite line for this fic...you write the make out scenes so intensely!!!

I'm loving how you are progressing through the season and righting what ABC wronged!

[hottielibrarian]

Thanks, that's a relief to hear the making out worked--that stuff always makes me nervous to write.
Yeah, ABC totally blew an amazing opportunity--how can someone not go back and reimagine what could have been?
Thanks so much for reading and taking time to leave such cool feedback!

[hottielibrarian]

Awesome, thanks! That's so nice of you! You totally just made my day!

[pinkwhiskers]

Right now I'm having a case of wishful thinking whereby the line "we can be scared together" is used in your context on the show instead of the meaningless one we got. The imagination, skill, and respect fanfic writers like yourself have, I believe is way more than anything A Big Corporation can ever come close to! So there! Way to go with the fixing, and I'm enjoying it :)

[hottielibrarian]

Cool, thanks! I always wondered why Shonda just forgot that whole concept of being scared together. It's like it was never said because then she went ahead and wrote the exact opposite.
Thanks so much for your awesome feedback as always--I so appreciate it!