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crazymaryt in house_of_sap

Moving Forward

May 25, 2009 19:05

Fandom: Lewis
Title: Moving Forward
Spoilers: up to 2.04 The Great and The Good
Rating: M just to be safe but it really needs a sap rating of way too much LOL ( Read more... )

lewis, author: crazymaryt

Comments 19

veradee May 26 2009, 23:25:37 UTC

This was lovely. You certainly convinced me that this H works very well, too. That phone call was a bit untimely, though, don't you think ? ;)

crazymaryt May 26 2009, 23:57:13 UTC

Thanks so much. I'm glad I could show you the power of the other L/H. LOL

As for the phone call I like to torture my ships. ;-)

pblazer May 27 2009, 18:57:51 UTC

Thanks for writing this. I do love Laura. And I really like how you wrote her. I share her concern that we don't see enough of the old Lewis. But he's still in there! He still peeks out. Good job!

crazymaryt May 27 2009, 22:08:46 UTC

I really love Laura too. I'm glad she came across as the Laura we know and love. Thanks again for reading.

inamberclad September 25 2009, 13:32:05 UTC

Too much sap? Nah, I enjoyed it =)

You've definitely got a way with words and I particularly loved the imagery. I could picture Robbie and Laura speaking the dialog as if I was watching them onscreen. And I love how James is concerned about his boss's welfare. Not much of a fan of Innocent's untimely interruption, though :(

You should consider a continuation or something similar. I'm definitely curious about the case Robbie seems to be obsessing over -- plenty of angst hinted at there, but that's just me talking.

Thanks for sharing this!

crazymaryt September 25 2009, 18:03:32 UTC

Thank you for reading and glad you enjoyed it.

I never thought before of exploring the case. Hmmn new plot bunny.

I do have several other ideas for them because I just love the interaction between Kevin Whately and Clare Holman. I think they have some wonderful chemistry.

timberwolfoz October 29 2009, 23:49:06 UTC

This was lovely!

As much as Lewis/Hathaway is my OTP within the Morse-Lewis series, I love Dr Laura Hobson and her obvious rapport with Robbie Lewis, so I could definitely see this happening. At least within the confines of the story. ;)

And hey, given the way Hathaway looks after Lewis, if Hathaway decided that Hobson was who Lewis needed, I can see him giving her a good nudge in Lewis's direction. And yes, getting himself ratted if he was nursing a case of the unrequiteds.

Seconding (thirding, fourthing, fithing) for more of this.

crazymaryt October 30 2009, 00:17:20 UTC

Thanks so much for reading.

I really have a huge affinity for Dr Hobson. Ever since her Morse days she's had some wonderful chemistry with the detectives she works with.

Thank you again.

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crazymaryt December 10 2009, 11:43:55 UTC

It is rather fluffy isn't it? LOL

It was very important to me to get Laura right. I love that character to bits and have to make sure I do her justice. As for shippiness this is the House of Sap. LOL

Glad I could provide some good Robbie images. ;-)

Thank you so much for reading.