The Choice

Sep 18, 2010 10:26

the choice, 6x20

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lauriedonachy September 18 2010, 15:39:29 UTC
A fabulously melancholy chapter.

I don't tend to read fanfiction based on this scene from The Choice, mainly because I've always felt no-one could quite capture the moment the way the actual writers did, but I thought I'd give this one a go since I've been following the Reboot stories, and it was just as gut wrenching as watching it had been.

Very well written.

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sjoes September 18 2010, 15:41:30 UTC
She looks stunned and he can hardly bare it so he places a kiss on her cheek, whispers “Goodnight, Cuddy” in her ear, and turns quickly away.

So sweet and hot in a way. BTW, it should be 'bear' instead of 'bare' but it's a cute Freudian slip. Baring next Monday. ;)

Love your writing!

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luciddreamer326 September 18 2010, 15:46:20 UTC
ROFL. See? Even we make mistakes. Thanks so much, dear. I shall fix.

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jwhite2199 September 18 2010, 16:40:46 UTC
This may be my fave reboot yet ( ... )

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yunioshi September 18 2010, 16:54:56 UTC
He breathes. Leaps. Hits rock bottom.
that line is beautiful. just so...

and oi. thank god this season ended well, otherwise i swear, I would just curl up and die from depression.
these just get sadder and sadder.
also these are amazing and brilliant and thank you for them. again, making this wait so much easier.

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captainpookey September 18 2010, 18:24:32 UTC
This is fantastic. I'm loving all of the additional interactions youre giving these two characters, and this dinner scene is fantastically heartbreaking and melancholy and sweet all wrapped up into one.

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