Baggage

Sep 19, 2010 09:49

6x21, baggage

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emily935 September 19 2010, 15:10:16 UTC
so heartbreaking....can't wait to see what you guys come up with for Help Me :)

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januarynineteen September 19 2010, 15:47:40 UTC
Oh wow, that last line I could actually feel. My favourite chapter so far. I can't believe it's ending soon. Can't you guys do this for every season?

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luciddreamer326 September 19 2010, 16:06:18 UTC
I have a feeling this season won't need much "correcting." ^__^

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tuckp3 September 19 2010, 18:19:00 UTC
yeah, i don't think this next season will need anything XD

there's a wonderful one that's cuddy POV, very well written - just gorgeous- for season two here:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3726789/1/

and another, that is much lighter and does hidden moments form seasons 2-4: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4788329/1/Hidden_Moments

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foyle_fan September 19 2010, 22:57:03 UTC
Oooh, here's the next to last chapter. I love how it dovetails with the scene in the bathroom which you wrote for Broken.

Having read all the previous ones in one go, I was reminded how heartbreaking Season 6 was on so many levels. Poor House! I think if there hadn't been that final scene in the Help Me episode, I'd have plunged into deep, dark depression along with House...

The apology which he ultimately felt able to leave for Cuddy just about killed me. Can't wait to find out what you'll come up with for the finale. Thanks for yet another great read!

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jwhite2199 September 20 2010, 04:12:23 UTC
Gut-wrechingly, heart-breakingly painful. But so, so true to House and to his journey throughout season 6. That the only words he can manage are an open-ended, all encompasing apology... and that it still doesn't say enough...

I don't even have the right words to say how amazing that is. Beautiful.

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aud_woman_in September 20 2010, 06:39:07 UTC
Wow, this is the most beautiful of the bunch so far. I love how you overlap scenes and actions - how very Shorian (Yaitanesian?) of you ;) - so as to give them greater impact and really deepen the emotional impact.

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