Broken, Part 1

Aug 30, 2010 13:03

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captainpookey August 30 2010, 19:33:01 UTC
Oh I am so excited for this! This first installment was wonderrrfullll. I love Alvie, I love all of House's emotions, the writing is very poetic and beautiful, and him trying to diagnose himself and "this Cuddy" problem in the bathroom was very poignant and true to character.

I also really likes this reference: If this is like Girl Interrupted, he is determined to be Angelina Jolie. because I just watched that movie and could totally see House trying to be Angelina. And poor guy, if he succeeds in that.

Looking forward to more!

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akemi16 August 30 2010, 20:08:51 UTC
Oh! I've been waiting for this!! :D beautiful 1st bit of this, i love your style of writing :)

the fact that house probably WOULD make a DDX of this is what makes it so real and that he wouldn't let anyone else see. brilliantly done, can't wait for the next part! :)

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bassetlove August 30 2010, 23:44:02 UTC
this is lovely so far! i can't wait for you to continue it! how often do you think you'll be updating? are you aiming to get the entire season done before 9/20? thanks, and keep up the great work!

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luciddreamer326 August 31 2010, 02:54:49 UTC
Thanks so much for reading! I think the plan is to unlock a chapter a day until the first ep of the season.

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dancequeen80 August 31 2010, 09:24:57 UTC
I love this :) can't wait for the next one :) it's soo very within the charcters.
And I loved your DDx list. Completely irrelavent list of words, for anyone BUT for House and 'his Cuddy' Kudos xx

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sjoes September 2 2010, 19:15:07 UTC
Brilliant project! Thought I'd never revisit 'Broken' again yet I just have. Keep up the good work!

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