break my heart why don't you. i'm all happy and high from the promos, and then i read this and i'm just like... fuuuuuckkkkkkk.... anyway, you write beautifully can't wait for the heartbreak that's in store for next chap/ep
This episode is one of my favourites, and I love the way you wrote it. You captured those little moments and made them even more profound.
This part really got me: 'Epiphany hits him profound and he uses the support of the wall to help him stand. He almost walks away from her, almost lets her leave without a word from him. But then he smells her and finds himself drawn to her, the proverbial moth to the flame.
Never once does he worry about getting singed, about crumbling to ash and losing his wings.'
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anyway, you write beautifully can't wait for the heartbreak that's in store for next chap/ep
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This part really got me:
'Epiphany hits him profound and he uses the support of the wall to help him stand. He almost walks away from her, almost lets her leave without a word from him. But then he smells her and finds himself drawn to her, the proverbial moth to the flame.
Never once does he worry about getting singed, about crumbling to ash and losing his wings.'
Perfect. :) :)
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