Brave Heart

Sep 04, 2010 10:06

brave heart, 6x06

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yunioshi September 4 2010, 16:22:47 UTC
break my heart why don't you. i'm all happy and high from the promos, and then i read this and i'm just like... fuuuuuckkkkkkk....
anyway, you write beautifully can't wait for the heartbreak that's in store for next chap/ep

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luciddreamer326 September 4 2010, 18:12:03 UTC
I admit it. I am an angst whore when I write. But you know it gets worse then ten million times better from here. TO THE POINT OF THE PROMOS. =)

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akemi16 September 4 2010, 20:34:11 UTC
wow, that was sad.... I'll be watching the promos again XD but great writing just the same! :)

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sjoes September 5 2010, 13:01:53 UTC
Very pretty! I'm so enjoying the reboot. It's very acceptably explaining the crooked writing in season 6. Great job, keep it up.

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emeraldeyes06 September 13 2010, 11:41:06 UTC
This episode is one of my favourites, and I love the way you wrote it. You captured those little moments and made them even more profound.

This part really got me:
'Epiphany hits him profound and he uses the support of the wall to help him stand. He almost walks away from her, almost lets her leave without a word from him. But then he smells her and finds himself drawn to her, the proverbial moth to the flame.

Never once does he worry about getting singed, about crumbling to ash and losing his wings.'

Perfect. :) :)

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jiraiyasgirl September 23 2010, 04:41:42 UTC
Wow...last bit killed me!!!

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