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Fic: A is to B what water is to fish

Oct 06, 2010 19:48

Author: HouseAu3
Title: A is to B what water is to fish
Rating: PG
Word Count: 547
Summary: Sex is to love what water is to fish. When he was still a little boy, he already knew about sex well enough to have written such a sentence.
Disclaimer: I don't own them. Maybe they own each other.
Author's note: I'm not a native speaker, so there might be ( Read more... )

pg, inception, fanfic, eames/arthur

Comments 11

we_reflamingos October 6 2010, 12:38:37 UTC

Regardless of some of it being disjointed from the not-a-native-speaker thing, I liked the premise and execution. It's sweet.

houseau3 October 6 2010, 12:46:41 UTC

Thanks :)
I'm working on the language part. Hopefully one day I'll be able to get everything right.

we_reflamingos October 6 2010, 13:40:10 UTC

If you want a few hints on what you wrote, I'm happy to share. I meant it when I said that I really liked the premise and am happy to offer constructive, meant in the best possible way, advice on the language. PM me if you want - It's not that much, but I'd like to help if it would be welcome.

we_reflamingos October 6 2010, 15:19:01 UTC

Thanks for the pm, but your privacy settings won't allow me to pm you back with details. I fully respect htat, but do you have a random email or something you can check in 12 hours that I can send details to? Or can you pm me with another form of communication?

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sillyoldbearr October 6 2010, 16:40:31 UTC

that was short and very to the point, which i like, and i liked the concept and eames' revelation. very interesting. it makes me ponder.

houseau3 October 6 2010, 22:01:04 UTC

I'm kind of thrifty in using words. Part of my personality, I guess.
Though i'm not so sure about this recently, having written a bunch of fics which are not short at all.
Glad you like it. I kind of come with this on my English class. We were learning the "A is to B what C is to D."sentence. And Eames just popped up and made this for me. Sorry and thanks, my dear teacher.

sully_is_hott October 6 2010, 18:44:21 UTC

I love this, oh lawd. <33 :)

houseau3 October 6 2010, 22:01:46 UTC

Thanks.
And I love your icon:D

fraubluecher October 6 2010, 23:00:58 UTC

Aww, now that was cute and very convincing. Nothing seems as boring as Arthur-less sex!

houseau3 October 7 2010, 10:01:18 UTC

Arthur-less sex is the worst :D
Glad you like it. E and A kind of live in my brain right now. It's kind of creepy that they keep popping up and giving comments on whatever is on my mind XD