Twins: Dropping the Bomb

[mistressoffoxes]

terrierlee totally dared me (read: someone) to do it!

Title: Dropping the Bomb
Archive: Twins
Summary: She had to tell them sometime...
Chronology (if any): A month after Aftermath of a Problem
Warnings (if any): A bit angsty, Demon!Ed, non beta-ed

Comments

[terrierlee]

Oh my.

Okay.

"while her Ed-Papa was standing outside, ready to help if she asked for it."

"Her hair was sweaty, clinging to her face."

When the demon!Ed was yelling, this didn't work. Better fix that.

Other than that. w00t :D

[mistressoffoxes]

Right >.<

I was writing this when I was supposed to be sleeping, so I'm not surprised that there's a few mistakes in it ^.^;a

But they are all corrected now ^.^

Other than that. w00t :D

*bows* Thank you. I was a bit afraid that I had messed something up, though ^.^;

[urplesquirrel]

Oh. Wow. Woooow....

I'll try again later for more coherency.

[mistressoffoxes]

...That's the second time something like that happened when I had posted a fic...

Are you people trying to tell me I'm good at writing angst or something? O.o

[urplesquirrel]

The Demon!Ed bit was great! And Nina stopping it by starting to cry... so flippin' true it hurts!

Ed is a total pushover for his kids.

Now I have to write her telling Maes... *ish majorly bunnied*

[mistressoffoxes]

I was hoping Ed would be IC ('cause he was practically sitting on my shoulder the entire time as I wrote the fic >.< )

*Evil Laughter* Yess, go write *shoves bunnies your way*