I love reading this pairing and well, this is one of the best I've read. It had just enough of the pain from the fallout of Cassidy's actions and the slow internal through processes of each of them to really work.
I'm happy that you didn't go any further than that scene for this first piece, because something about them just going to make out right away always plays wrong.
I think fics were people boff at the slightest provocation of a hat are boring, and not particularly realistic. That's normal interactions, not even the case when you're dealing with two people who have as many issues as these two do. Taking it slow definitely sweetens the payoff, no pun intended.
I loved this! I've been a big fan of Dick stories lately, probably because I can't stand Veronica right now but don't usually like Logan pairing with anyone else. Anyways, I think this is my favorite Dick fic so far!
> “When I’m not drunk, I hate me. When I am drunk, I hate me less.” He looked proud of himself for that statement, and she supposed any higher philosophical thought from Dick was something to be filed under ‘Good Things’.
This is fantastic -- insight into Dick but still keeping with the amused tone.
>“I can’t believe I’m listening to Dick Casablancas. I think stupid is contagious.” “You know, that’s not the first time someone has said that to me.”
I'm about 2000 words into the next part and continuing to amuse myself, so it's all good. I'm glad you enjoyed the Dickishness of this, that he was still in character even though I pushed him and Mac to evolve. Thanks for the review!
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I'm happy that you didn't go any further than that scene for this first piece, because something about them just going to make out right away always plays wrong.
Wonderful job!
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Thanks!
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> “When I’m not drunk, I hate me. When I am drunk, I hate me less.” He looked proud of himself for that statement, and she supposed any higher philosophical thought from Dick was something to be filed under ‘Good Things’.
This is fantastic -- insight into Dick but still keeping with the amused tone.
>“I can’t believe I’m listening to Dick Casablancas. I think stupid is contagious.” “You know, that’s not the first time someone has said that to me.”
This Cracked. Me. Up.
Hope to see the next part soon! <3
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"...I think stupid is contagious."
LOL...that was my favorite line! :) Can't wait to read more!
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this is awesome, i absolutley love this fic, you have done a really good job :)
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