[JONGYU] Organ Failure

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Title: Organ Failure
Author: fatdix
Rating: PG (for one swear word)
Pairing: Jongyu
Genre: Angst
Summary: My voice goes a little higher; sounds like a crack. A big crack in the ground, and you step to the side (safety first).
A/N: For jongyu's 200's a couple contest! Used the second prompt, Soulstar's 잊을래 @ 080926 Super Junior Kiss the Radio. Kind of

Comments

[jacqandtherat]

Omg, the last paragraph killed me. This was beautifully written and i thought you managed to grasp Onew's inner feelings(basically a broken heart in the midst of introspection) very realistically!

[legoskies]

homg you're mad awesome.
ilysm ♥

[nyappyx3]

How the shit can you make such amazing metaphors ♥

[tamiko_unknown]

Save for my personal feel of some disjointed flow in the paragraphs, this piece is absolutely gorgeous ♥ The contrast between what's being said and what's being done is very sharp, which makes the metaphors and the emotions in the latter half even more effective. ♥♥♥