She Falls. a fictional story by paris hayes

Jan 11, 2004 17:33

she looks in the mirror, stares, as if she could shatter the reflective glass with her eyes. she tilts her head to the side, exhales all the air trapped in her lungs, and rapidly inhales. she suspends the air in her body, her stomach becomes completely concave, and the bones of her hips reach out, pressing against her skin from the inside, ( Read more... )

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eyelineryou January 12 2004, 02:24:43 UTC
::stomache turns::
whew, intense.

raw emotion,how disturbingly lovely.

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_the_last January 12 2004, 02:27:28 UTC
beautiful

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howiwishiwasnt January 12 2004, 02:37:51 UTC
why thank you.

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paris writes gooood (grammar goood i know) obsessedwithpan January 13 2004, 00:22:24 UTC
thats gooooooood!!!! aww pawis i wuv wooooo! oh yeah..... wheres manage i cant find it... :(

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deadonarrival50 January 13 2004, 00:30:41 UTC
it's so real and captures the truth

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