Fic: Everything loose will land

[howlinchickhowl]

Title: Everything loose will land
Characters/Pairing:Keith/Watts
Rating:PG-13
Word count: ~1600

Author's Notes: Some Kind of Wonderful fic written for taragel for the five acts meme, it kind of veered off course, but I quite like it, so I hope she will forgive me.

Summary:The cigarette burns, unsmoked in her hand. How long had she loved him?

Comments

[callmeonetrack]

Waaaattttssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh bb, I love it! Her voice is so spot-on, all impatience and hard edges, and then her flashback is so tender. Awwwww.

Keith laughed at her shiver, his breath hot and sweet-smelling as it skated over her face. She turned into him, burying her head in the crook of his neck, exhaled heavily when he brought his arms fully around her, pressed his nose into her hair, and for the first time all day long, Watts smiled.

So deliciously *shivery* indeed. Such lovely sweet tension and comfort! Those kind of little USTy moments are so your trademark!

I have such a kink for the "sneaking into someone's bed" thing too. This was just wonderful and delicious! Thank you so much!!

(And feel free to snag the icon too if you like!)

[howlinchickhowl]

:D <3

Yay!!!! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! (I was slightly worried that it was kind of just Watts/Watts and Ray heavy).

Her voice is so spot-on, all impatience and hard edges

Thank you so much, I'm so in love with MSM's phrasing and expressions in this movie, where she pauses, her pitch, the slight drawl,I wanted so badly for it to sound like her, in your head.

Those kind of little USTy moments are so your trademark!

I have a trademark!! :D Thanks bb :D God, sharing a bed/sneaking in through windows to share a bed/basically being in a bed is like, my favourite romantic thing ever. If it were the only thing that ever happened, I would be pretty much 92% ok with that.

I'm so glad you prompted them, I have been looking for a good reason to write SKOW for SO LONG, and you provided the perfect excuse! (Icon totally snagged, thanks)

<3

[kag523]

Oh honey... I am just in love with this fic so much. You have a true gift (and I'm going to PM you in a moment so I'm not just spamming your page with OMG OMG OMG OMG and embarrassing you). Seriously, though, this fic is so beautiful and sweet, and you've captured so much in the brevity of so few words. *salutes you* I have no fucking idea how you do that... but wow. I am TOTALLY impressed

[howlinchickhowl]

So, this comment (and your PM) made my day. And I would have replied earlier, except that I spent so long watching the kissing that I was late getting ready for work and didn't have time! Seriously, if you want me to do something on time, do not let me watch this scene, because it just won't get done, it might be my favourite kiss in anything ever. So, triple thanks for that!

I seriously, seriously do not know how to say thank you for this wonderful comment, except that I am grateful and humbled and touched and really just want to give you the world's longest hug.

So *WORLD'S LONGEST HUG*

Seriously K, you knock me out.

All the love
<3