Comments | howlinchickhowl: Brand new sheets, lets break them in...

howlinchickhowl

Brand new sheets, lets break them in...

Apr 18, 2012 00:15

Easy yo. A few days ago I asked for some *ahem* quickfire prompts to get my juices flowing. Turns out I'm rustier than I thought, but I have written things! The second one got too long for an LJ comment so am posting it properly, with like a title and everything.

Title: Underneath our feathered skin
Pairing: Kara/Lee
Rating PG - (sorry, I thought ( Read more... )

flah, kara/lee, written for..., fanfiction, bsg

Comments 14

scifishipper April 17 2012, 23:26:41 UTC

Ahhhh! Delightful. I adore Lee's POV - it feels so perfectly spot-on. And it ends perfectly happily and did not need to go another moment longer. *happy sigh*

Thank you! <3<3<3

howlinchickhowl April 18 2012, 20:58:37 UTC

oohhh good I'm glad you liked it :) It felt like the right place to end to me, but I just don't have a lot of experience writing happy things, it feels....foreign. :)

Thanks for the prompt! And for commenting :)

koolaidmom11 April 18 2012, 00:13:31 UTC

Well, you don't seem very rusty to me!!!! Well done. I loved it

howlinchickhowl April 18 2012, 20:59:22 UTC

Haha, thanks! It was like pulling teeth, but I am glad it came out all right in the end :) Thanks for reading ♥

callmeonetrack April 18 2012, 00:29:33 UTC

Very sweet and adorable! <3

howlinchickhowl April 18 2012, 21:00:02 UTC

Much like myself :)

Thank you! <3

kdbleu April 18 2012, 03:33:32 UTC

I love the simplicity of this. Of Lee knowing Kara's routine as well as his own regulation one. Of laundry and warm sheets. And kissing. :D

howlinchickhowl April 18 2012, 21:06:34 UTC

hehe, she likes to think she's soooo unpredictable :) And hey, I heard laundry, I thought kissing, that's just the way my brain works! Thanks for reading :)

meko00 April 18 2012, 10:31:51 UTC

Oh, this is lovely.

howlinchickhowl April 18 2012, 21:07:08 UTC

Thanks, and hey there!

meko00 April 19 2012, 08:36:30 UTC

Hey! I got a reply to a comment from the autumn, and promptly logged in. Gah, I've had far too much RL stuff to even contemplate LJ-ing. But things are looking up, so you might see me soon again. :-)

How've you been?

(Also, those two...)

howlinchickhowl April 20 2012, 00:49:11 UTC

Gah, I've had far too much RL stuff to even contemplate LJ-ing.

I hear ya, I'm just now back myself, but it's cool that you're still around. I was thinking about you just the other day.

I've been...not the best. But, as with you, things are looking up :)

(Who two? Grace and Eli? My goodness yes.)