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[hoyah]

beautiful lies, dirty secrets
xiuhan (friendship); xiu/oc; r; approx 4.5k
warnings: direct physical + allusions to sexual abuse
disclaimer: fic of a fic. a prequel. thank you for allowing me to write this.
for danie and isa for encouraging me throughout this, and ki who linked me to the original. ♥

Comments

[hoyah]

>< Ah thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked it and didn't go, "wtf did she did she do to my story?" Haha I'm actually not good with plots, either, and this is much longer than anything I wrote when I used to write. >< So I'm glad you thought the pacing was not bad.

:) And yes, I might work on a sequel. >< I have all these ideas. Thank you for inspiring them. I actually haven't written anything substantial like this in years. This was a really fun project. :) Thank you, thank you.

Oh and feel free to link to this if you'd like. ^^ I'm very flattered that you think it's good enough to share. ;;

[hoyah]

http://hoyah.livejournal.com/1489724.html ><;;;

[zhonqda]

wow this is awesome.

..oh my god did you allude to Tao in the end? ;o;

[hoyah]

did you mean the boy that juhyuk approached at the end of the story? >< ah you should read the original keke. it might be more obvious who it is then.

[zhonqda]

i did read the original before this actually. keke.

[hoyah]

haha :) it's jongdae that i was alluding to. two left feet

[hiddenmeghanis]

gorgeous~
it does justice to what happened in the original fic, ad the allusions are beautiful~
thanks for sharing :D

[hoyah]

glad you liked it. ^^ thanks for leaving a comment

[hoyah]

everyone hates him haha :) i guess it's a success, though, if you really hate him XD

[m_a_creations]

Holy!! My feels are going all over the place. This was really well written. After I read forgottenoceans' I had to read the prequel to it. And...T____T it totally killed me towards the end. And homygawd!!! That was Jongdae at the end was it not?!?!?

Minseok and Luhan!! There was not much going on between them but the way they approached each other and the way they developed their friendship...just so good TwT

That Juhyuk dude needs to get his ass arrested. People like him need to be extinguished from this world.

//ugly sobs// My feels!! And then forgottenoceans' fic!!!
You guys are awesome. TuT

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