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Heir

May 29, 2006 17:23

Title: Heir
House: Ravenclaw
Word Count: 100
Challenge: In Memoriam
Characters/Pairings: Narcissa, with mentions of Lucius and Draco
Author's Notes: I wrote this originally for the malfoy100 "saying goodbye" challenge, but thought it fit here, too. I really don't mean to offend anyone by this, and it shouldn't have that effect, but just in case ( Read more... )

author: turin_lover, challenge: in memoriam, narcissa malfoy

Comments 9

gwenlliana May 30 2006, 00:23:32 UTC

This was haunting... I would love to see what this coulld become if you expounded on it.

alice_pike June 5 2006, 21:13:52 UTC

I'm glad it had that effect on you. I've never thought about continuing it, but it would be interesting...

gwenlliana June 5 2006, 21:23:31 UTC

I'm not sure if you should continue it forward or just expound backwards. But in any case, very nice job.

moreteadk May 30 2006, 07:01:58 UTC

Nice! It definitely explains his delicate features. :p

alice_pike June 5 2006, 21:14:15 UTC

Thanks!

inkblot_fiend May 30 2006, 13:27:59 UTC

That's a chilling story... makes me feel sorry for Narcissa, and the world she has to live in. Nicely done.

alice_pike June 5 2006, 21:18:04 UTC

I'm glad the mood came across well. I can just picture something like this happening among the ancient pureblood wizarding families, but I can't really imagine what it must be like to live in that type of society. This drabble was an attempt to understand it.

I'm really glad you liked it!

evelynlela May 31 2006, 02:26:45 UTC

That's so sad.

Wow.

alice_pike June 5 2006, 21:20:11 UTC

Sorry! *attempts to cheer up*

But hey, at least that tells me the mood came across. I'm pleased that it affected you like it did. (Besides the making you sad part, of course *wink*)